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الدرة المكنون
28-02-2013, 06:28 PM
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The Three Africas
When many people hear the word Africa, they picture steaming jungles and gorillas. Hollywood films have shrunk the public image of this immense, varied continent into a small segment of its actual diversity. To have a more accurate picture of the whole continent, however, one should remember that there are, roughly, three Africas, each with its distinct climate and terrain and with a style of life suited to the environment. The continent can be divided into the northern desert areas, the southeastern grasslands, and the tropical jungles to the southwest.
The northern regions have the environment and living patterns of the desert. Egypt, Libya, Algeria, and Morocco have hot, dry climates with very little land suited to farming. Therefore, the population tends to be clustered into cities along rivers or the seacoast or into smaller settlements near oases. For thousands of years, people have lived in this vast region, subsisting partly on what crops and animals they could raise and partly on trade with Europe.
The southeastern grasslands provide a better environment for animal life and for some kinds of crops. Many wild animals inhabit the plains in this region--elephants, giraffes, rhinoceros, antelopes, zebras, and lions. The people in this area have long been expert cattle raisers and hunters. Tea, coffee, cotton, cashew nuts, and tobacco are some of the main products grown in this region. Fishing also provides some food and income for people along the coast. The population here is less concentrated in cities and towns than in the north, but tends to be denser in areas where adequate rainfall and fertile soil make farming possible.
West Africa is the region closest to the Hollywood image of mysterious jungles. As in the other two regions, the way people subsist depends upon their environment. This does not mean that most of the people live in grass huts in the jungle. Such nations as Nigeria have become highly modernized by income from oil, timber, and minerals. Most of the western countries have some farming that provides food and income; sugar cane, coffee, and tobacco are the important cash crops, while bananas, rice, and corn are raised for food. Fishing in the rivers and along the coast also accounts for food and income, and precious stones, especially diamonds, enhance the economy of Angola and the Ivory Coast.
Even a superficial look at the major regions of Africa shows that it is a varied continent with several environments. Although most of the continent is tropical in its range of temperature, the climate ranges from deserts to rain forests. Similarly, human life-styles vary from the simplest rural villages to industrial cities, both new and ancient. Contrary to the myth, however, jungle life makes up only a very small portion of the whole of Africa.
1. Questions on The Introduction
(a) Underline the HOOK.
(b) Underline the THESIS STATEMENT.

2. Questions on The three Bodies
(a) Rewrite the TOPIC SENTENCE of the 1st Body.
The northern regions have the environment and living patterns of the desert.

(b) Does the LAST SENTENCE of 2nd Body give the idea of the next Body.
No, it is not

3. Questions on Conclusion
(a)The Conclusion ends with :
(i) advice
(ii) warning
(iii)prediction
(iv) ask a question
(v) give an insight
(b) Underline the sentence that RESTATES the THESIS STATEMENT
Although most of the continent is tropical in its range of temperature, the climate ranges from deserts to rain forests.
MARKING SCHEME for the Questions on Essay Structure:
Full Marks—06
6 for = identify, underline, rewrite and make them full correct following the instructions in the Question
5 for = identify, underline, rewrite the answers with only one mistake
4 for = As above with two mistakes in the answer
3 for = three mistakes
2 for = four mistakes
1 for = five mistakes
0 for = none of the answers correct
LEARNING OUTCOME: To be able to write the INTRODUCTION ,3 BODIES, CONCLUSION of an ESSAY. To have a sound knowledge of the RHETORICS of all the paragraphs in an ESSAY.

الدرة المكنون
04-03-2013, 06:53 PM
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Rawand
04-03-2013, 09:37 PM
Read the essay and answer the questions given below (there is a marking scheme and the learning outcomes of this assignment)

The Three Africans when many people hear the word Africa, they picture steaming jungles and gorillas. Hollywood films have shrunk the public image of this immense, varied continent into a small segment of its actual diversity. To have a more accurate picture of the whole continent, however, one should remember that there are, roughly, three Africans, each with its distinct climate and terrain and with a style of life suited to the environment. The continent can be divided into the northern desert areas, the southeastern grasslands, and the tropical jungles to the southwest.

The northern regions have the environment and living patterns of the desert. Egypt, Libya, Algeria, and Morocco have hot, dry climates with very little land suited to farming. Therefore, the population tends to be clustered into cities along rivers or the seacoast or into smaller settlements near oases. For thousands of years, people have lived in this vast region, subsisting partly on what crops and animals they could raise and partly on trade with Europe.
The southeastern grasslands provide a better environment for animal life and for some kinds of crops. Many wild animals inhabit the plains in this region--elephants, giraffes, rhinoceros, antelopes, zebras, and lions. The people in this area have long been expert cattle raisers and hunters. Tea, coffee, cotton, cashew nuts, and tobacco are some of the main products grown in this region. Fishing also provides some food and income for people along the coast. The population here is less concentrated in cities and towns than in the north, but tends to be denser in areas where adequate rainfall and fertile soil make farming possible.
West Africa is the region closest to the Hollywood image of mysterious jungles. As in the other two regions, the way people subsist depends upon their environment. This does not mean that most of the people live in grass huts in the jungle. Such nations as Nigeria have become highly modernized by income from oil, timber, and minerals. Most of the western countries have some farming that provides food and income; sugar cane, coffee, and tobacco are the important cash crops, while bananas, rice, and corn are raised for food. Fishing in the rivers and along the coast also accounts for food and income, and precious stones, especially diamonds, enhance the economy of Angola and the Ivory Coast.
Even a superficial look at the major regions of Africa shows that it is a varied continent with several environments. Although most of the continent is tropical in its range of temperature, the climate ranges from deserts to rain forests. Similarly, human life-styles vary from the simplest rural villages to industrial cities, both new and ancient. Contrary to the myth, however, jungle life makes up only a very small portion of the whole of Africa.




1. Questions on The Introduction
(a) Underline the HOOK.
(b) Underline the THESIS STATEMENT.

2. Questions on The three Bodies
(a) Rewrite the TOPIC SENTENCE of the 1st Body.
The northern regions have the environment and living patterns of the desert.

(b) Does the LAST SENTENCE of 2nd Body give the idea of the next Body?
No, it is not

3. Questions on Conclusion
(a) The Conclusion ends with:
(i) Advice
(ii) Warning
(iii) Prediction
(iv) Ask a question
(v) Give an insight

(b) Underline the sentence that RESTATES the THESIS STATEMENT

Although most of the continent is tropical in its range of temperature, the climate ranges from deserts to rain forests.
MARKING SCHEME for the Questions on Essay Structure:
Full Marks—06
6 for = identify, underline, rewrite and make them full correct following the instructions in the Question
5 for = identify, underline, rewrite the answers with only one mistake
4 for = As above with two mistakes in the answer
3 for = three mistakes
2 for = four mistakes
1 for = five mistakes
0 for = none of the answers correct
LEARNING OUTCOME: To be able to write the INTRODUCTION, 3 BODIES, CONCLUSION of an ESSAY. To have a sound knowledge of the RHETORICS of all the paragraphs in an ESSAY.



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الدرة المكنون
04-03-2013, 10:06 PM
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