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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : نص انجليزي محتاج الى من ينتقده



ali20
04-03-2013, 04:59 PM
السلام عليكم الى كل اعضاء سعودي انجلش هذا نص انجليزي واريد معرفة اذا كانت هناك اخطاء املائيه او اخطاء قواعديه ضروري جدا وشكراا

Visiting Sick Friends

Hospitals are a scary place for those visiting and for the patients. They do not want to be there as much as you do not. Do not come first thing in the morning if possible. Patients are still tired from the night before and more likely to be having tests them. Calling first lets the person know when to expect you. It also allows them to pick a proper time. You show that you care enough to take them into consideration. What is best for them is what is most important. They are the person who is sick and in need, not you. Do not go there and fill the person up with chatter about your life unless they ask to know. Keep things light and allow the person to talk most of the time, but at the same time do not make the person feel like they have to amuse you. If the conversations start to run out or if they person seems tired leave, you're there for them, not for you.

khalid 2
04-03-2013, 06:19 PM
مره متلخبط واخطاء كثيره , اتوقع هذي ترجمة قوقل. عجزت اقراء واصحح كله غلط القرمر

نقية
04-03-2013, 10:52 PM
هذا نص مقلوب .. ويبدو انه منقول من مترجم الكتروني .. حاولي ان تكتبي النص بنفسك وشكرا لك

naif9009
08-03-2013, 08:44 PM
يجي من يفيدك

حمور22
19-03-2013, 10:24 PM
في اعتقادي هذا ليس بنص . انها قصيدة شعرية poem وتحمل الطابع الشعري المنظوم وذلك راي الشخصي والطابع الشعري لا يعتمد كثيرا علي التركيب النحوي او القواعدي الصحيح وا نما يعتمد علي الشعور بمعني الكلمة والاحساس بها.

What else
20-03-2013, 06:54 PM
it seems that the ideas are not linked and not compatable