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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Never Noticed..||



thé úńtőld
15-06-2013, 10:59 PM
http://lifeforhim.files.wordpress.com/2011/12/dying-rose-bwc-big.jpg



she gave him her heart when she came to him
but he never felt it and

left it to die




a story of a rose left to die

the untold , 9\6\2013

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thé úńtőld
15-06-2013, 11:00 PM
http://techjost.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/Rose_Red.jpg




Delicate , lovely and beautiful as a rose she stood there,,
she was spreading beauty around her exactly as a rose could spread its pleasant aroma,,
she was beyond reach , off touch , far away , exotic , and unavailable !!

like a rose, getting to her improperly could hurt!
her thorns were too obvious , not for who can't feel of course !


http://www.theroseman.net/images/rose.jpg

she was like a rose , she faded away of rejection as well !

that rose was fine in her field ,, was growing prettier and prettier ,
yet someone overwhelmed by her loveliness , took her ,

then,she could only live if being spoiled and protected ,
for she lost all her natural protection!


then,she became dependent on someone!
and that hurt,
for there was no one noble to be near it for ever !

that's why, she survived for only three days
and weakly died ,

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-qo4rKKAZMog/TuB_8YldHSI/AAAAAAAAAJc/PYi3WE8z62Y/s1600/dying-rose.jpg


that's rose passed away,,
never wait for her ,,
never !

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thé úńtőld
15-06-2013, 11:01 PM
The story began a long time ago


http://perfexcellence.files.wordpress.com/2012/01/dying-rose.jpg





she has grown up

spoiled by dad

protected by mam

cherished by a step mam

supported by crazily-wise brothers

and surrounded by beautifully-noisy sisters


..so she grew being
delicate .. sensitive.. loving ..

easy to cry
hard to get content !


years went by
and that girl got older, smarter and wiser

she was fortunate by having every thing she wished for
but she lack beauty

she , according to others' definition of beauty, wasn't any thing but beautiful



***

due to this, she has no tight relation with others

she speaks a little, interact a little
all her her time spent in company of her

imagination and daydreaming

and her father
because he was blind
he is the only person on earth who saw her true soul,
who loved her the most

***



one day, she lost her dad
and lost with him all her sense of life

she literary died with him

the only one who could understand her .. left
the only one whom she cared about is no more around her


so she drowned i n her sorrow, and her soul grieved him forever

until that day when she found her soul mate

he was far away, yet he could understand her
because again he couldn't see her

thy communicated via the net

he loved her just from talking to her
he saw her true self without judging her personality by her look

and that was how true love between them grew
two souls melt and contained each other for what sounds like forever

***

she got out of her gloomy mode thanks to him
he embraced her wild self and
taught her how to love life
and how to draw her smile again

and so she grew prettier inside

***

but as said, nothing lasts forever

a day came when he asked for her picture
he wanted to marry her
and he needed to see her first

she , overwhelmed by his love, gave him one
and he flattered her beauty

yet he disappeared with no word !

after a week, he came telling her that he has engaged to one of his
relatives due to his grandi' will

and that he wanted her but he can't stand against his family

and
she died again
she died twice

once, when her beloved dad left
and once when her love chose to leave !



http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs25/i/2012/201/7/0/the_dying_rose____by_dealingheart-d1h97x2.jpg

thé úńtőld
15-06-2013, 11:04 PM
they promised each other, that only death will set them apart
but
apparently death was late

so he left

left


and she died

died



The End


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thé úńtőld
15-06-2013, 11:05 PM
Roses for all who passes here


Best Regards

Alsqour.w
16-06-2013, 12:11 PM
I like such topics
It's worth reading
Keep up the great work here
A
Rose
for
U
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Kind Regards

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
16-06-2013, 07:59 PM
I love the way you express your feelings
dont stop writing
life has its own way to teach us
how to love
how to feel the pain
how to grow up
and how to be a better person

thé úńtőld
18-06-2013, 02:15 PM
I like such topics
It's worth reading
Keep up the great work here
A
Rose
for
U
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Kind Regards


I am honored by ur reply
It added incredible beauty to the topic


and

dozens of roses to ur pure soul

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May Allah bless u

thé úńtőld
18-06-2013, 02:20 PM
I love the way you express your feelings
dont stop writing
life has its own way to teach us
how to love
how to feel the pain
how to grow up
and how to be a better person


Yeah, very true
life has its own way


Thank you for being here
I am honored


won't stop writing if there is who can appreciate and
enlighten me to have better pieces


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May Allah bless u