صححوا اخطائي ب informal letter

[ابلة افنان]

السلام عليكم
حابه انزل رساله الوحده الاولى وتعطوني ملاحظاتكم عليها وتعدلوا لي اخطائي



I'm so happy to hear from you . We definitely have a lot of interesting school events , but I think the most important one is The National Day . Actually , it's very special for all Saudis because it's the day where Saudi Arabia is unified.
On this day , Student wear green and white clothes .Also ,the school decorate in the same colors . The ceremony begins with National anthem. Then the school principal gives a speech. More speeches are given by teachers , as well as students. Then come competitions and songs.
I'm very excited for the next National Day. I'll participate in event . I'll be the hero of the play about the history of the kingdom.
Anyway, I hope this will help you in your project .Would you like me to send you some pictures ,too? It would be no problem.
Take care,
Amal
وشاكره لكم مقدما

[ساحل]

I'm so happy to hear from you . We definitely have a lot of interesting school events , but I think the most important one is The National Day . Actually , it's very special for all Saudis because it's the day where Saudi Arabia is unified.
On this day , Students wear green and white clothes .Also ,the school is decorated in the same colors . The ceremony begins with the National anthem. Then the school principal gives a speech. More speeches are given by teachers , as well as students. Then come competitions and songs are made.

I'm very excited for the next National Day. I'll participate in the event . I'll be the hero of the play about the history of the kingdom.
Anyway, I hope this will help you in your project .Would you like me to send you some pictures ,too? It would be no problem.
Take care,
Amal

[ساحل]

Then come competitions and songs are made
ارجوا حذف كلمة come

[أوشا404]

الله يجزي كل متعاون ومتعاونة الف خير

[أحاسيس مؤلمة]

great work :smile (40):

[الفجرالبعيد]

i'm so happy to hear from you . We definitely have a lot of interesting school events , but i think the most important one is the national day . Actually , it's very special for all saudis because it's the day where saudi arabia is unified.
On this day , students wear green and white clothes .also ,the school is decorated in the same colors . The ceremony begins with the national anthem. Then the school principal gives a speech. More speeches are given by teachers , as well as students. Then come competitions and songs are made.

I'm very excited for the next national day. I'll participate in the event . I'll be the hero of the play about the history of the kingdom.
Anyway, i hope this will help you in your project .would you like me to send you some pictures ,too? It would be no problem.
Take care,
amal


ليش الرساله دي استخدمتيها بالدرس ياليت توضحين طريقة شرحك للدرس جزاك الله الف خير

[Hope4Ever]

الدرس كان عبارة عن حدث يحتفل به بالمدرسة

تعبير جدا رائع يعطيك العافية

ممكن يكتبوا عن حفل التخرج

[laem]

شكرا لاني استفدت منه كتيررر

[smart class]

روعه بصراحه بسوي نفس افكره لطالباتي

[نقطة بداية]

جزاكم الله خير

[hinda]

يعطيك العافية
و شكراً لك

[ام جلنار]

well done


:smile2 (1):

[silly me]

جزاك الله كل خير وبارك الله فيك