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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : a poem by me



Reckless
25-08-2006, 08:42 PM
Long goodbye
can you see the sadness
my eyes are swimming in tears
i still remeber your kindness
when you were there all these years
you were the fountain of my happiness
you made me fight my fears
and saved me from my emptiness
your face still smiling with cheers
your were my every thing in my lonliness
so, goodbye with crying tears

....this is one of my poems i hope u like it,, see yeah
oh i forgot this is a nother one ,,lol
lA teardrop on a rose
I am far away
And i felt your tear
the same tear when i flew away
Leaving you is what i fear
I wish nothing is on the way
You have that rose my dear
It reminds you of the goodbye
But that rose makes me near
So, don't cry my dear

T.Sultan
25-08-2006, 10:31 PM
Reckless,

What a nice poem ! I'm really impressed. Thank you so much for letting us share it with you.

friendlyteacher
25-08-2006, 11:09 PM
Reckless
I realy like your first poem it is so nice and lovely
keep on the great work
with all my love