Reckless
27-08-2006, 02:45 AM
These are some of my other poems , i need the readers' view , i don't know if they are good or not but your opinion well help thanks and may Allah bless u all
Mixed feelings of love and hate
i was happy when you loved me
and sad when you left me
i felt the joy in happiness
and i have tasted the tears of sadness
once i was flying in your freedom
but now i am jailed in your kingdom
those days were like heaven
but now i am sleeping in a coffin
you were my warm sun
but now it is too hot to run
every time i see your picture on the wall
i feel mixed that i wanna stumble and fal
A memory
you know the night ,it was coming
you know the day,it was coming
and the big sadness in us camping
shut the doors and pull down the curtains
but life which is slowly going
has been lost from our hands
and the river which is running
and floating, is drying
i remeber we crossed it many times
we walked in its dreams
we dreamt with its fishes,with its little canoes
and today while the night flags
and the little sun of the daylight
behind the clouds just waving
i am sitting now,like it was nothing
getting closer to the net
where every thing as it was just spinning
The Past
Life is like big tunnel
you go through it so fast
every memory switches like a channel
each one didn't last
i am scared of this dark road
this road road reminds me of the past
every thing I've said or told
a sad play oh! i am one of the cast
a feeling can't be sold
the past is following me so fast
like an old man with a hand so cold
patting on my shoulder as i sat
this memory , this page i can't fold
i wish my past is dead and won't last
killing the happiness in me, as i am getting ol
Mixed feelings of love and hate
i was happy when you loved me
and sad when you left me
i felt the joy in happiness
and i have tasted the tears of sadness
once i was flying in your freedom
but now i am jailed in your kingdom
those days were like heaven
but now i am sleeping in a coffin
you were my warm sun
but now it is too hot to run
every time i see your picture on the wall
i feel mixed that i wanna stumble and fal
A memory
you know the night ,it was coming
you know the day,it was coming
and the big sadness in us camping
shut the doors and pull down the curtains
but life which is slowly going
has been lost from our hands
and the river which is running
and floating, is drying
i remeber we crossed it many times
we walked in its dreams
we dreamt with its fishes,with its little canoes
and today while the night flags
and the little sun of the daylight
behind the clouds just waving
i am sitting now,like it was nothing
getting closer to the net
where every thing as it was just spinning
The Past
Life is like big tunnel
you go through it so fast
every memory switches like a channel
each one didn't last
i am scared of this dark road
this road road reminds me of the past
every thing I've said or told
a sad play oh! i am one of the cast
a feeling can't be sold
the past is following me so fast
like an old man with a hand so cold
patting on my shoulder as i sat
this memory , this page i can't fold
i wish my past is dead and won't last
killing the happiness in me, as i am getting ol