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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Hallucination 1



Try To Reach
28-08-2006, 10:28 PM
Hello every one
here you will have a modest work by me
i hope you 'll like it
its about hallucination in different parts
some might be poems and other might be a free writing
any way i call them all hallucination
as it appears to me



Hallucination 1
( at the north )

At the north
/ Dear M.E
I shouldn't write about it
For all that long years
I still in fear
For that not to sea
If you were wrong or that its me
In my life I learned
That I shouldn't always refrain
To use my own little brain
Wherever I found my heart craned
and can't determine
in a mysterious place
at the north
I cried in a lower voice
but then I'm no longer than a voice
among
People
gathered there
In a narrowness terrain somewhere
My heart rupturing for it everywhere
Each second Into the middle of Nowhere

Oh you !
its you ?
"astonishingly !! me !!

Don't your remember when…
I killed you
At that night where no a star
Appears in the sky
All I did…
Is when I broke away
And left you alone
In a vivid zone of pain
Its just as yours
Don't you remember
Its just as yours.
a
Gentle touch
Followed by
a
brush
you tried to catch
but I make it
and I'm out of touch
huh
did you match ?
or you still
in marsh ?
hey I wouldn't leave you
in parch
if you didn't do so
………
What
a
hush !!
hey
Did you forget how to speak ?

I'm recollecting

Oh
I thought you were in march !
I thought you were dead
When you stared at …
Wait !!
Its all about
A bullet from a far distance of
Half a meter
.
.
.
.
In
a
clear
sky
of
black
At the north









blue writing representing me
black writing representing M.E


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حمامة
28-08-2006, 11:59 PM
al shareef



I have engoyed reading so much


thanx alot

TWANA
29-08-2006, 01:29 AM
.......................... al shareef


thanx alot

Reckless
29-08-2006, 02:56 AM
Do u mean free writing or letting your mind leads u to no where??????????????????

lingo
29-08-2006, 08:45 AM
I think I need to have some thing to help me figure out your writing.You were right it is a product of LSD

Try To Reach
30-08-2006, 12:31 AM
حمامة
i'm happy you like it

Try To Reach
30-08-2006, 12:34 AM
.......................... al shareef


thanx alot


Glad you like it
be always close

Try To Reach
30-08-2006, 12:38 AM
Do u mean free writing or letting your mind leads u to no where??????????????????

You see some people like to go to the NO WHERE places
as some just find their PARADISE inside their minds
stay near my friend

Try To Reach
30-08-2006, 12:45 AM
I think I need to have some thing to help me figure out your writing.You were right it is a product of LSD


looooooool

I can't believe it
thank you my friend keep always around my threads :neutral:


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lingo
30-08-2006, 09:06 AM
sure I am always around and around I don't know when I ever come around .your writing like shot guns lift my way high and leave me hanging on

Meant To be
30-08-2006, 10:11 AM
I think I've read it before
Looooooooooooooooooooool
and I told you that I'm the one who got hallucinated with your words that lead to NOWHERE
I think you've heard of Don before
I really like it dude
thank you for sharing with us
Good for you
:74:

enigma
02-09-2006, 09:46 PM
Not bad

Not bad at all brother

We'll be glad to have more of these hallucinations

lingo
02-09-2006, 11:55 PM
Hallucinating is a talent and an art I notice that many people around here don't appreciate Hallucination .One needs to be in that stage to understand it.Some time if you really like to understand you need the help of an expert and some tools .Unfortunately it is an art killed by society and hidden under a rug of misunderstanding .For those who appreciate this art of Hallucinating
Take it deep Take it and keep Take it till you Leap and care for no Creep

Try To Reach
03-09-2006, 12:02 AM
sure I am always around and around I don't know when I ever come around .your writing like shot guns lift my way high and leave me hanging on

looooooooooool it must be crazy though i like when it did to you so
really i 'm happy that my modest work has an impact upon you like this
Glad to have you dear best / lingo
any time any place
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Try To Reach
03-09-2006, 12:09 AM
I think I've read it before
Looooooooooooooooooooool
and I told you that I'm the one who got hallucinated with your words that lead to NOWHERE
I think you've heard of Don before
I really like it dude
thank you for sharing with us
Good for you
:74:


OoOoh God you are her Don Corleone is here
this site will be rolling for sure
you are welcome ya poet
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Try To Reach
03-09-2006, 12:17 AM
Not bad

Not bad at all brother

We'll be glad to have more of these hallucinations

Heavens
thanx there
you will have Part II so soon and i called it
the ghost ,the body and me

Try To Reach
03-09-2006, 12:38 AM
Hallucinating is a talent and an art I notice that many people around here don't appreciate Hallucination .One needs to be in that stage to understand it.Some time if you really like to understand you need the help of an expert and some tools .Unfortunately it is an art killed by society and hidden under a rug of misunderstanding .For those who appreciate this art of Hallucinating
Take it deep Take it and keep Take it till you Leap and care for no Creep





oh man
you returned with what it kills
loooooooooooool
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thanx i consider this as a Lingo prize instead of noble ones
unforgettable one
is this one
and you are the man
:36_4_12:









this work is not perfect
there must be some mistakes
though i'll wait even for ages

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