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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : just jealous



● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
13-01-2016, 04:20 PM
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I am just jealous of the morning breeze
of the sunlight on your face
of all the beauty, you hold inside your heart
I swear they were just thoughts,
they never dare to come out
she looks at me with her big honey eyes
no words said between us but her smile
light the loneliness cave inside me
melts the icy heart
I thought he was on long vacation
frozen
with his memories
but with her gentle touch,
I can hear his beating come to life again
.
serenity


Thanks Ala
you gave me something to write about
It will never be as your great work
but I love flowers
^_^
Thanks again my brother

ACME
21-01-2016, 05:55 PM
I like the dialogue you made between you and her
The personification is greatly presented
It is a reat topic
keep it coming
:smile (101):
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● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
22-01-2016, 03:43 PM
I like the dialogue you made between you and her
The personification is greatly presented
It is a reat topic
keep it coming
:smile (101):
.


Thanks for your kind & encouraging words . I truly appreciate it
I will try my best.

بحر الأماان
31-01-2016, 03:25 PM
so touching words, I love it more
,
Ala'a
Never give up on the great work my teacher
,
keep shining my dear

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
31-01-2016, 07:12 PM
so touching words, I love it more
,
Ala'a
Never give up on the great work my teacher
,
keep shining my dear


!!Look who is here
:smile (50):

I am going to make a party
:girl face (183):

I am so happy that you like it
I
'Dedicate it To You'