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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Scary Feeling



Meant To be
26-09-2006, 03:29 AM
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I used to compose poems, but what you're going to read here is considered as a conception

It's the first time to write such a peice of writing,

I hope you like it..[/center]

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It's a scary feeling....
To discover the death of your tongue,,,,
when you need to talk....
To discover the death of your heart,,,,
when you need the love and the life....
And you discover that you are all alone,,,,
like the autumn's leaves, when you need others....
It's such an arduous consciousness to handle,,,,
which makes you feel like unimpressionable....
Trying to face the truth, which is crystal clear,,,,
However, all you face is something hardly appears....
That makes your life up side down,,,,
Moreover, your smile is turning into frown....


It's worse than those handcuffs that shackled your both hands, though you're blameless,,,,
In spite of doing all your best to satisfy others, yet you realize they're careless....


Neither you are dead, nor you are alive,,,,
hopelessly, struggling with great strife....
catching your breath but you're capable to scream,,,,
closing your eyes, it's still hidden beyond your dream....


A sensation that words can't describe,,,,



By Your Brother,
Meant To Be

الغاليه
26-09-2006, 07:04 PM
scary to death

yet you're still alive

to face the shadows of your fears with every breath you take



Meant To be


it's so great


I like it so much....specially this line


In spite of doing all your best to satisfy others, yet you realize they're careless....

T.Sultan
26-09-2006, 09:01 PM
Thank you for the indescribable piece of writing. I really like the way you composed the lines. It's really scarry feeling when you face the things you mentioned in bewteeen the lines. Stay cool , brother.

like Moon
26-09-2006, 09:59 PM
Very Nice Poem
its really scarry feeling
&
I Like Ur Way of composed the lines.
Keep On
My Allah Will Bless U Bro

Meant To be
27-09-2006, 05:26 AM
الغالية,

I'm so glad to see you the fisrt one who replied,

Thanks so much for the encouragement

I'm so greatful to you dear sister

Thanks for passing by

Meant To be
27-09-2006, 05:33 AM
T.Sultan,

I'm extremely happy for admiring my writing,

Dear brother, your encouragement makes me realize that you are always there, I don't know how could I repay you

Have a nice day

Meant To be
27-09-2006, 05:38 AM
Like Moon,

I'm so happy to see you here

Thanks so much dear sister for your words

God bless ya, Amen

enigma
27-09-2006, 04:08 PM
To find out the death of your tongue and your heart,to feel all alone while many are around you is truly an ugly feeling

We can only escape it by tying ourselves to Allah

Thanks brother for these beautiful lines

Meant To be
28-09-2006, 03:19 AM
Enigma,

I definitely agree and beleive in what you've said

Thanks dear sister

God bless you, Amen