المساعد الشخصي الرقمي

مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : You 'll be proud of me



Reina
25-12-2006, 06:32 AM
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Hi people
this is my first writing IN ENGLISH language i like writing in Arabic but today i try to write in English




§¤~¤§¤~¤§ You 'll be proud of me§¤~¤§¤~¤§

I remember when I asked everyone about you
My tears dropped on my little cheeks
Like drizzle wondering .. Where are you
You don't miss me .do you?
You don't love me. do you?


All these questions jumped to my innocent mind
Thinking that you left us because you don't love me
When I make mistake and my Grand mom reprehends me
I would sit to the corner in the darkness referring these
Mistake to you because you left me alone and let me make mistakes

I miss you badly my lovely angel
I always asked my cute star in the sky
To tell you that i love you

I 'll do my best to be a great woman
And you 'll be proud of me uncle
Oh sorry DAD: you are my DAD
My soul and every thing in my innocent life
I know that you love me so much >

You didn't leave me alone
It's not your choice because you died....!!!
Really , now you can lie peacefully in your grave
And you ' ll be proud of me

Aseel
25-12-2006, 06:56 PM
Dear Reina


I would like to welcome you here first among your brothers and sisters

http://members.aol.com/pinkcrayons33/images/welcomekoas.gif


Enjoy it with us



Regarding your writing


It's a wonderful piece of writing, full of emotinal words and true feelings

I'm sure your Dad is proud of you

God bless his soul and bless you sweetheart

Keep up the excellent work

Best of luck

Aseel

Meant To be
26-12-2006, 05:09 AM
Dear Riena,

First of all, welcome to our club, enjoy your time with us as you're among your brothers and sisters


As for your piece of writing, it's marvelous and wonderful, well-kept feelings, really true ones, so emotional

Sure he's proud of you

May God bless his soul and domicile him Paradise, Amen

Thanks for sharing your truely feelings with us


Keep it up

Reina
26-12-2006, 06:37 AM
OoOoOoOoOoh my GOD
:235:

Thank you very much my dear sister Aseel , brother Meant to be

really your sweet word encourage me to write more than you 'll expected

may God bless you

your dear sister:Riena

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Reena
26-12-2006, 06:58 AM
Welcome sister Reina

Same Name !! We ll B 1

I ll B proud of U

Salsa
26-12-2006, 12:48 PM
Welcome dear sis

We really glad you joind us here in our lil worm house

I pray our family in this club will get bigger and we all support each other

So stay in this club sweet heart u`ll take care of you

Your words are so worm and meanfull

God bless all the dads in the world

bless your father soul

Thanx for the words

Keep your good work ok

enigma
27-12-2006, 05:17 PM
Reina

Welcome dear sister

Thanks for the beautiful piece of writing I'm sure that your father will be proud of you

Try To Reach
28-12-2006, 12:04 AM
you are welcome in here
and happy start dear
Just enjoy your english
we are good listners

besides : I enjoyed your piece of writing that it is

Reina
08-01-2007, 09:25 PM
Hi
am back to you my cute friends

sorry for bing late
dear sister :Reena
this is not my name
Riena it mean :Queen in spanish language
i love spanish language
and welcome to you my cute little angel

we 'll be proud of us sweety

Dear sister :salsa
thank you so much sweety
God bless you dear

Dear enigma
thank you honey

Dear: Try To Reach
thank you soo much
and i enjoyed your replay that it is


:36_16_2: God bless you all

Shyguy
10-01-2007, 04:06 PM
absolutely WoNdErFuL and extremely ToUcHiNg piece of work..and seriously, great works like this only exist when the words come out of the deepest parts of hearts(that's why it touches all of ours)

keep up the great work sis..

ام بسمه
10-01-2007, 05:34 PM
We are really prode of you
I was honered to read your writing

Reina
13-01-2007, 01:43 AM
[align=left]Oh my family
thank you sooo much
my dear sister:ام بسمة
great thank to you sweety
my dear brother :shy guy
thank you so0o0o much for your sweet words
may God BLESS you all[/center]