hallucination : 8

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Till the end

Still ,, I'm walking

When In my eyes

Routes got narrowed

The dark darkened

And the beautiful face

of dawn

loomed patchy

scratchy

and catchy *

Come to light through a hatch
a word says

you are perished

perished

perished

Still ,, I was walking


My trauma is a laugh weeping

And my tears

Coz of the weeping trauma
laughing


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[GREEN-MOUNTAIN]

MashaALLAH brother

i am realy having the pleasure of reading your words

[Meant To be]

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perpetually marvelous imaginations

A talent, has got a sense of innovation

Here's my humble hallucinations

Yet, ain't compared with your sensations

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Still,,, wondering

Assuredly straggling

Impasse's getting roomy

Visible, as well of gloomy

A passage far-reaching

Along the way

Supposed being a hatch

Constrained me to stay

Was illusory not much

Darkness

Vagueness

Everything's dusky

My night became risky

Felt this way before

So insecure

Suddenly, leaves rustling

Indicated me to light

A way out

Frustratedly, without a care

I was in a middle of nowhere

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I really did enjoy reading it, as well I like your way of writing,

so this is my first try of such writings you called " Hallucinations " I hope you like it and if you have any criticism, I will appreciate it, so that would be avoided whenever I think of writing such arts

Waiting your reply


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[Try To Reach]

GREEN-MOUNTAIN


And i'm having the pleasure
of having you in here dear friend

So thank you so much



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[Try To Reach]

the cardinal points today is to the east
Since the hallucination of Meant To Be has released

hey my matchless buddy
and you too ,, you're permanently electrifying my feeling

towards such species of writing ,, as a matter of fact ,
I can't carry on picking out
Such quixotic ideas and bring it to light

in here ,, if there is
no Meant To Be !!

And regarding that prodigious piece
It was for sure the bullets which cease
All words that tried to describe it,, So please

Be always the breeze
That urges me to
The increase

in performing on this sort of trapeze

every body free your detainees

Meant To Be

thank you
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[enigma]

I loved the last part

Thanks for sharing it

[Try To Reach]

my pleasure then ,,
thanx for coming sister

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