مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : A Miilion Why
Meant To be
29-01-2007, 11:47 PM
I dedicated this poem to my X-Friends only, though I couldn't help it while I was composing it. However, I composed it last night but the friendships started 6 years ago, though it's hard to be forgotten but still unforgiving.
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A Million Why!!!?
By:
Meant To Be
As much as the stars in the above sky
along with tears, yet haven't got dried
in so far as every lasting painful sigh
I still ask and really wonder why?!!
Why do I always care with so sincerity?
When they got nothing but pitiless heart
Why am I treated so bad with severity
As they just dream of falling me apart
I've been wholehearted with them all
The light they miss in the darkened night
I've been always there with heart and soul
Never thought of anything might not right
Some friends turned away for no reason at all
I was puzzled and hurt when they shun my call
I've heard the sound, yeah the solitary crying
Might well be the sound of our friendships dying
All I wanted from you was a well to do
Being a sort of friend I have been to you
Yet, wind usually brings what ships hate
Unfortunately, such juncture I couldn't abate
A lot of questions together with million whys
Wiped the sleep from my own charming eyes
How could I remember any blissful moment
When deep down traumas are quite evident
Time won't heal the anguish of my wound
Nor can it make me forget
As I used to call out to them but no respond
Except my only echo I get
I hope that you feel more than I do
To suffer much more than I passed through
To meet with adversities which you can't endure
Spending your life living without a cure
Farewell to every moment I spent with you
Farewell to those lies spread by you
Farewell to every single spent times
That constrained me to fit my rhymes
As for me, the die is cast
My sorrow will not last
For desires I can't deny
So, do not ask me WHY!!!
Aseel
30-01-2007, 10:05 PM
Alas, for friendship means nothing for those
They don't know the meaning of friendship
They don't deserve you as a friend
Friends, we shall not call them
hypocrites, that word describes them
for caring and true love, they don' know
Out of your heart, let them go
Never regret it for they never deserved you
Wipe your tears away
For sure you have true friends who can make up your day :) 0
T.Sultan
01-02-2007, 06:06 PM
Dear Meant to be ,
Poets are the luckiest people on earth because they have true friends that are "words" . I really like the way you composed the poem , for it expresses the true feeling you bear in your heart.
Dear brother,
In life , I've learned that I should have as many friends as possible , for there might be one of ten a sincere friend I can rely on. My friend , if you want to live a hppy life , free your heart from any traces and memories of your past pain and experiences.
Thank you so much fro sharing the wonderful poem with us. God bless you. Please , keep up the great work.
Meant To be
01-02-2007, 06:36 PM
Alas, for friendship means nothing for those
They don't know the meaning of friendship
They don't deserve you as a friend
Friends, we shall not call them
hypocrites, that word describes them
for caring and true love, they don' know
Out of your heart, let them go
Never regret it for they never deserved you
Wipe your tears away
For sure you have true friends who can make up your day :) 0
I really can't add anything as your words made me realize they're such hypocrites, yet I couldn't know that as it's too late. Anyway, I won't feel pity no more for such " THINGS ". Thank God I still have such great cronies as Try To Reach is one of them.
Dear sister, I really thank you from the bottom of my heart for your words
May God bless you, Amen
Meant To be
01-02-2007, 06:46 PM
Dear brother,
In life , I've learned that I should have as many friends as possible , for there might be one of ten a sincere friend I can rely on. My friend , if you want to live a hppy life , free your heart from any traces and memories of your past pain and experiences.
Dear brother,
In life, I've learnt more than you imagine, though as one part of my poems says, " wind usually brings what ships hate" . But it doesn't mean that I don't have any friends, No, I still have the best friends ever.
Believe me! my heart is completely free from such painful memories, as they don't deserve them inside it.
Thanks for your words dear brother and a million thank for passing by
Peace
Try To Reach
02-02-2007, 12:30 AM
Am I included
?
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Man remember "that days" when we were competing with each other
Who can say more words in English !!
Look Now,, ma'sha'a Allah we're fighting whose poems better
If right,,,, lol
We reach a stage where poems can be an arena
To test or sense in writing such art
I'm really happy to see that from you and I'm honored enough to be one of your friends whom take a great time of your concerns
I'll go for it I'll go…. So thanx
By:
Meant To Be
As much as the stars in the above sky
along with tears, yet haven't got dried
in so far as every lasting painful sigh
I still ask and really wonder why?!!
Why do I always care with so sincerity?
When they got nothing but pitiless heart
Why am I treated so bad with severity
As they just dream of falling me apart
I've been wholehearted with them all
The light they miss in the darkened night
I've been always there with heart and soul
Never thought of anything might not right
Some friends turned away for no reason at all
I was puzzled and hurt when they shun my call
I've heard the sound, yeah the solitary crying
Might well be the sound of our friendships dying
All I wanted from you was a well to do
Being a sort of friend I have been to you
Yet, wind usually brings what ships hate
Unfortunately, such juncture I couldn't abate
A lot of questions together with million whys
Wiped the sleep from my own charming eyes
How could I remember any blissful moment
When deep down traumas are quite evident
Time won't heal the anguish of my wound
Nor can it make me forget
As I used to call out to them but no respond
Except my only echo I get
I hope that you feel more than I do
To suffer much more than I passed through
To meet with adversities which you can't endure
Spending your life living without a cure
Farewell to every moment I spent with you
Farewell to those lies spread by you
Farewell to every single spent times
That constrained me to fit my rhymes
As for me, the die is cast
My sorrow will not last
For desires I can't deny
So, do not ask me WHY!!!
Hey
I can see what you asked me to quit it once
Spreading and flaming through these lines,, but I do not even intend to ask why , though I prefer the word : Who
Who are those friends you want to reach that farewell to
As I'm not sure really pal
Look i can feel you
But what I know it will be a weighty loss to them
those you dedicated this poem to
Look : if it is a secret you can PM me if I'm not one of them
For now you are the man
Keep beating around we are watching you
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ام بسمه
02-02-2007, 04:42 PM
Dear Meant to be ,
I really don't know what to say
The words you've written are so true and pure
You are lucky to have such a gift and be able to express your feelings in such a nice, attractive and pure way
Thanks for giving us such an opportunity to feel your feelings with you
Meant To be
03-02-2007, 11:53 AM
Am I included
?
http://www.mahjoob.com/ar/forums/images/smilies/ag.gif
Man remember "that days" when we were competing with each other
Who can say more words in English !!
Look Now,, ma'sha'a Allah we're fighting whose poems better
If right,,,, lol
We reach a stage where poems can be an arena
To test or sense in writing such art
I'm really happy to see that from you and I'm honored enough to be one of your friends whom take a great time of your concerns
I'll go for it I'll go…. So thanx
Man, come on for God's sake, you're not one of them at all, even I don't compare you with those
and yead I do remember those days, and we have to thank Allah for such gift He's granted us
Man you know me well as I write what I feel deep inside, and I don't like compliment at all.
Hey
I can see what you asked me to quit it once
Spreading and flaming through these lines,, but I do not even intend to ask why , though I prefer the word : Who
Who are those friends you want to reach that farewell to
As I'm not sure really pal
Look i can feel you
But what I know it will be a weighty loss to them
those you dedicated this poem to
Man those whom I can't call friends no more are people you haven't met them at all, and thank God you haven't known them, and damn sure it's a weighty loss to them
Look : if it is a secret you can PM me if I'm not one of them
For now you are the man
Keep beating around we are watching you
Needless to ask me dude, YOU ARE NOT ONE OF THEM , as you know what kind of friend you are to me
I'm so lucky and blessed to have you as a dear brother, and I'm honored by your everlasting presence on my topics,
SO, thanks as much as the stars in the above sky
Long Live Bro
Meant To be
03-02-2007, 11:58 AM
Dear Meant to be ,
I really don't know what to say
The words you've written are so true and pure
You are lucky to have such a gift and be able to express your feelings in such a nice, attractive and pure way
Thanks for giving us such an opportunity to feel your feelings with you
You're most welcome dear sister for you passing by
And thanks a million for your nice and encouraging words, I really do appreciate that
Thanks again
ALFARAZDAQ
19-02-2007, 02:23 AM
Thank You So Much
It's So Expressive And Shows Your Deep Feelings
Meant To be
20-02-2007, 12:25 PM
Thank You So Much
It's So Expressive And Shows Your Deep Feelings
It's a pleasure seeing you here
Thanks a lot for passing by
sha3oola
21-02-2007, 07:54 AM
UR WORDS TOUCH ME DEEPLY DEAR BROTHER:
I READ THE PEOM &I FEEL IT
REALLY ITS A PERFECT WORK
GO ON WE R WAITING:36_4_12:
Meant To be
27-02-2007, 09:12 AM
UR WORDS TOUCH ME DEEPLY DEAR BROTHER:
I READ THE PEOM &I FEEL IT
REALLY ITS A PERFECT WORK
GO ON WE R WAITING:36_4_12:
It's so great to hear it,
Thanks a lot for your words, I really appreciate that, and thanks for your comment
enigma
08-03-2007, 03:05 PM
Meant To Be
I can tell by reading these lines how much pain lies in you
But
Let me tell you that everyone has his/her reasons to act in a certain way
Always give excuses to others
Never agonize yourself with such infertile inquiries
Meant To be
10-03-2007, 09:12 AM
Meant To Be
I can tell by reading these lines how much pain lies in you
But
Let me tell you that everyone has his/her reasons to act in a certain way
Always give excuses to others
Never agonize yourself with such infertile inquiries
I don't know what to say sister, as your words made me speechless
Thank you so much for this advice, I really do appreciate it
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