a poem

[marygain]

I wrote this poem .......just few lines
I hope that you will like it..........o

Stop for a moment

Take my hands

Look at my eyes

And get back to the past

For childhood days

When we were the best friends

When I was hitting you and cry

And you were hitting me and cry

That was before we know the a b c

What a nice days!!!!!

Why….

Why every thing changed now!!!

Where is our innocence

Our clear feelings

Our smiles!

The smiles that give the life its meaning

Why…What kind of future is waiting for us!

Me and you and all of us …

Think …and answer me

I hope you like it :p

[Reena]

I liked it

though I can't creticise poets

I like ur words and their meanings

Lots of thanx

The Best is waiting 4 U in future ( God Willing ) R

[marygain]

2Reena[/SIZE]
thank you my dear ........you too.... the best is waiting for you and all of us (In shaa Allah) 0

[Wiill Vandom]

Hi sweety
First thanx it is realy nice
second I didn't know that you write poem
all these time and you didn't tell me.. what a good friend ??
oh don't worry I'm just kidding

[marygain]

hhhhhhhhhhhhh....your are really funny:124:
thanke you veeeeeeery much my dearest friend
now .... it is your turn ....show us what do you have

[Wiill Vandom]

I already wrote two you have to check them yourself and give me your opinion ...honestly ..ok