I'll never give up

[Wiill Vandom]

I'll never give up
by: me
I'll never give up..
cause everything is way
I'll try ..try and try..
cause to me nothing called no way
If I failed I'd keep trying
and always I'll lead my way..
my hope can always keep growing
and succeed would be the pay..
I know that I'll never stop going
hard to do ..too easy to say
working hard, having fun and playing
things will help me to stay

I want you to give me your comments honestly please to improve my writing

[marygain]

ohhhhhh.......very nice poem
I didn't know that you are a poet
so...don't stop here
and sow us your nice work
thank you honey
M.G
:36_4_12:

[Wiill Vandom]

I have more but they are not that good
sweet people like you deserve the best always my dear
Thanx for passing[/COLOR[COLOR="DarkOrchid"]]
you will never stop your jokes?..
but thanx coz you always draw a smile in my face

[Try To Reach]

Wiill made the rules for yourself
and don't follow any

Like that you will improve believe me

the rhyme you selected was so beautiful

but maybe employing the words were not that good

will look

any start is a weak but the weakness never last

your highness



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[Meant To be]

"One of the thing that I love the most is the "rhyme

but it doesn't mean that I forget about the essence of the poem

Anyway, you fitted the rhyme, though some words forced you to do so

one more thing, I agree with TTR in employing the words


,Last but not least

The rain starts with a drop

so never hesitate, nor stop

sure you will reach the top

one day you'll reap what you sow

[Wiill Vandom]

Wiill made the rules for yourself
and don't follow any

Like that you will improve believe me

the rhyme you selected was so beautiful

but maybe employing the words were not that good

will look

any start is a weak but the weakness never last

your highness



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write more we are reading

Thanx for passing and Thanx for the golden advice

[Wiill Vandom]

"One


,Last but not least

The rain starts with a drop

so never hesitate, nor stop

sure you will reach the top

one day you'll reap what you sow
Thank you brothers for your advices
and Thanx for encouraging me to keep going
I said it before and I'm saying it again I'll never give up

[Aseel]

Well,

another poet has joined the club

I really liked it

Keep it up >> and

Never give up

;)

We're waiting for more

[Wiill Vandom]

Thanx honey
nice to read your comments
always..

[f e e l . i t]

graet words
keep Going
i like it ..
^_^

[Wiill Vandom]

Thanx sister feell it for passing
I'm waiting to read yours

[enigma]

Nice one

Keep trying dear and never give up