مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Judge me
CHARLES DICKENS
05-04-2007, 05:17 PM
Glittering and beaming while getting high
Attracting and catching everyone's eye
The real waves of serenity and peace
Holding you love never leaving a piece
Am I dear pal thinking of Moon ?
Or is't just dusk, darkness and soon
Night falling wherever the paths would go
Misleading nor leading a weary passenger though
He keeps looking up guided by a star
Alas he has lost far.. so far
I wrote this piece of Poem a month ago....and I really need your sincere criticism
:p
Mona Dickens
enigma
05-04-2007, 05:55 PM
No
No
No
:marsa49:
I really can't believe it
It's
CHARLES DICKENS
Would you believe me if I told you that you've been crossing my mind lately and wondering what's wrong with you
Where've you been dear
You've been missed dearly
I hope that things are going just fine with you
Tell me did you finish your studies? o
Regarding the poem I find it magnificent
:36_1_11:
You shouldn't keep it away for all of that time
Welcome back sis
:196:
Meant To be
05-04-2007, 07:04 PM
How could I criticize such piece of writing
No Way
I really loved it and I found it a wonderful masterpiece
Keep writing sister, I'm eager to read such poems
I wish you all the best
Try To Reach
06-04-2007, 02:30 AM
it is a song
that will take many times on my lips
i will sing it high and i will sing it low
these beautiful lines flow
believe me sister this is beyond criticism
this is so enchanting for sure
plz write more
to keep us singing
(:
,,
Aseel
06-04-2007, 04:18 PM
I find it amazing
I thinks the number of poets here is increasing
Isn't it ??
Keep it up sister
Best of luck
CHARLES DICKENS
19-04-2007, 02:27 PM
Dearest
engima
meant to be
try to reach
Aseel
Thanks alot for your lovely words ...
I think I'm inspired by you all...that's why I'm writing such poems
:p
Dear engima
you can't imagin how much your thought amused me....Did I really pass by your mind...? WoW that's cool
any way Sis I finished my studies last year now
Guess what ?
:sad:
I'm a teacher..!!
I've been teaching since the first term... and I'm looking forward to finish the second one
.....
merci beaucoup for your concern
Yours
M.Dickens
:marsa20:
enigma
19-04-2007, 04:39 PM
Mona
Yes dear
You came on my mind
A sweet soul like yours is never forgotten easily
So glad that you finished your studies
CONGRATULATIONS
Why haven't you say it before
We wanted to give you a party
I'm sure you'll be a great teacher
Just enjoy it
Please be around as often as you can
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