Judge me

[CHARLES DICKENS]

Glittering and beaming while getting high
Attracting and catching everyone's eye

The real waves of serenity and peace
Holding you love never leaving a piece

Am I dear pal thinking of Moon ?
Or is't just dusk, darkness and soon

Night falling wherever the paths would go
Misleading nor leading a weary passenger though

He keeps looking up guided by a star
Alas he has lost far.. so far


I wrote this piece of Poem a month ago....and I really need your sincere criticism
:p

Mona Dickens

[enigma]

No

No


No


:marsa49:

I really can't believe it

It's

CHARLES DICKENS



Would you believe me if I told you that you've been crossing my mind lately and wondering what's wrong with you

Where've you been dear

You've been missed dearly

I hope that things are going just fine with you

Tell me did you finish your studies? o






Regarding the poem I find it magnificent

:36_1_11:

You shouldn't keep it away for all of that time


Welcome back sis


:196:

[Meant To be]

How could I criticize such piece of writing

No Way

I really loved it and I found it a wonderful masterpiece


Keep writing sister, I'm eager to read such poems


I wish you all the best

[Try To Reach]

it is a song

that will take many times on my lips

i will sing it high and i will sing it low

these beautiful lines flow

believe me sister this is beyond criticism

this is so enchanting for sure

plz write more

to keep us singing

(:

,,

[Aseel]

I find it amazing

I thinks the number of poets here is increasing

Isn't it ??


Keep it up sister

Best of luck

[CHARLES DICKENS]

Dearest
engima
meant to be
try to reach
Aseel

Thanks alot for your lovely words ...
I think I'm inspired by you all...that's why I'm writing such poems
:p
Dear engima
you can't imagin how much your thought amused me....Did I really pass by your mind...? WoW that's cool
any way Sis I finished my studies last year now
Guess what ?
:sad:
I'm a teacher..!!
I've been teaching since the first term... and I'm looking forward to finish the second one
.....
merci beaucoup for your concern
Yours
M.Dickens
:marsa20:

[enigma]

Mona



Yes dear

You came on my mind

A sweet soul like yours is never forgotten easily



So glad that you finished your studies



CONGRATULATIONS


Why haven't you say it before


We wanted to give you a party



I'm sure you'll be a great teacher

Just enjoy it

Please be around as often as you can