My First poem looooool

[Try To Reach]

loooooooooool

Guess what ,, while i was searching in my old papers i found this funny poem
I wrote it years ago loooooool

it is so funny please have a look

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look at the funny title
hehehehehe

named the following


Thank you
:74:

In delight and happy night

Words and sentences fired me

She said things impolite

That made me a green gee


I choose words carefully and write

Things before never be impolite

While I was waiting for a reply

I saw her starting a fight



That’s ok that’s all ok

I won't be rough or white

I'll just bind my words in tight

And I will say to you happy night

People sometimes really smite

And you shouldn't pay back or be fright

You just calm down and be quiet

Don't fight don't retaliate or even guyed


? Where are you dear

?? where are you

Since you left me alone in here

I tighten my words and choose them right

I won't hurt you again

I just didn't meant to

I just didn't meant to
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You left me because of one word

People fired me billions of them

Come back to me again in this world

Before I leave it to the bad of them




I have edited some grammer and Vocabulary stuff
looooooooool


:74:

[القلب الساهي]

Asalaam Alikom
so nice words
the poem full of hope


thanx alot

[الأمل الضائع]

oh brother

i thought i'll read avery weak poem

although it aws your first poem but it is so nice


you were born apoet

[Aseel]

Well

how nice to see our poet's first attempts and writings


Masha Allah

Meant to be and you are gifted by the way

I enjoy reading your poems alot

They just take you from one line to another easily


mmmmmmmmm


Maybe , one day I'll share with you some of my writings

lol

[ام بسمه]

It was a nice poem
How old were you ????l

I like it v. much

Can you write English poems on the Arabic way ???l
I tried to do so many times but it won’t work
You know what I mean 2 parts, with gafeah and wazen but in English

[مخاوي الدمعه]

Wonderful poem

[enigma]

Not bad

Not bad at all

[Meant To be]

Plah .. Plah ... Plah

That's what I read up there


hehehehe

Joking


As you said brother it's from your old papers

In comparison with your recently writings, we'll notice the difference between'em


Here's my rule

Step by Step

you'll reach the top


Good shot brother

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mmmmmmmmm


Maybe , one day I'll share with you some of my writings

lol


Well Aseel I hate that mmmmmmmm

Come on share us what you got, ain't nothing would stop you from doing so

Don't be shy, so don't hesitate

[marygain]

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...........what a nice poem

I liked the poem's rhyme.......
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hy hy hy look at our TTR......... he becomes a poet!!!!0


just kidding.......:74:




continue your great job..........



you are the best :clapping:

[Try To Reach]

Asalaam Alikom
so nice words
the poem full of hope
thanx alot

Wa Alycom As-Slam Wa Rahmatu Allahi Wa Barakatuh

thank you dear for your beautiful coming

and thanx for you and in advance sir

[Try To Reach]

oh brother

i thought i'll read avery weak poem

although it aws your first poem but it is so nice


you were born apoet



yeah I have Edited enough well to be read
loooooooool

thank you dear for your beautiful coming

[Try To Reach]

Well

how nice to see our poet's first attempts and writings


Masha Allah

Meant to be and you are gifted by the way

I enjoy reading your poems alot

They just take you from one line to another easily


mmmmmmmmm


Maybe , one day I'll share with you some of my writings

lol


Good describing sister i liked it very much
this poem is for you as a gift for that descripation


Look Meant To Be
said sth very bad about you loooooooool
in post 8
and so you don't have to listen to
heheheheheheh

I do laughed about it but i don't agree

[Try To Reach]

Wonderful poem

You are welcome my friend

[Try To Reach]

Not bad

Not bad at all


thank you darling

[Try To Reach]

Plah .. Plah ... Plah

That's what I read up there


hehehehe

Joking


As you said brother it's from your old papers

In comparison with your recently writings, we'll notice the difference between'em


Here's my rule

Step by Step

you'll reach the top


Good shot brother

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Well Aseel I hate that mmmmmmmm

Come on share us what you got, ain't nothing would stop you from doing so

Don't be shy, so don't hesitate

You

You are welcome in here dear thin boy
hehehehehehe


I'm really honored to see you in my threads while i'm not visiting you that much
really really i'm the noughty one to not have the opportunity to comment on yours
but i promise one day i'll

loooooooooool

it may came after a long time

heheheheheh


and regarding Aseel I told her that you didn't meant to bother her but she refused to listen
now its your fault
i told you don't mock on people how do you do it on moderators
looooooooooool
:74:

just kidding

kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai

[Try To Reach]

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...........what a nice poem

I liked the poem's rhyme.......
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hy hy hy look at our TTR......... he becomes a poet!!!!0


just kidding.......:74:




continue your great job..........



you are the best :clapping:

thank you sister for your beautiful coming
i'm really honored to see you here

take your time

and nice staying


best wishes

[روعة العمر]

thankks alot for this nice poem

[Wiill Vandom]

very nice
That was your first poem and it was realy ....I don't now what to say about it but wo0o0ow
Thanx brother for sharing
and I hope that i can Try To Reach your level
which is impossible...

[Try To Reach]

thankks alot for this nice poem

you are welcome
ya Ra'wa'ah

happy to see you here sister

[Try To Reach]

very nice
That was your first poem and it was realy ....I don't now what to say about it but wo0o0ow
Thanx brother for sharing
and I hope that i can Try To Reach your level
which is impossible...

impossible !! Why
who am I to be not reached
looooooool

Meant To Be reached and passed to the forward places

and Aseel got her nose bigger and bigger in one of the competition we were once loooooool

i hope she 'll never see this too

kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai

and


happy tiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiime

[J.J]

well .. well .. well ... look at this poem ?!!!
is it really yours .....!!!!!!!!! hahahahahaha...

I wish if I can see it before editing those errors ...it would be wondeful luaghing at your mistakes .. loooooooooooooooooool ...
Just kidding wallahi ..... it's really very nice ...
thanks alot dear for sharing it with us ....

May Allah bless you Try to Reach ...

[Try To Reach]

oooouch

that hurts

looooooooooool

you wanna see my mistakes loooooool

ok,, count to Ten

and then open your eyes slowly

you 'll find it spreading just in front of you

we are all human who commit a mistake

as well as you beautiful JJ

but for my mistakes here

I'm not going to show it to a sweet girl like you yourself

I'm afraid it may hurt your sense of reading

loooooooool


thank you sister

and good life is waiting for you

my daily wish to you

[J.J]

Hey brother ...

wallahi I was just kidding I didn't mean anything ....

You know that I have high regard and admiration of what you write..

coz I know I wouldn't be able to write even a single line like one of those in your first

poem ...

so I'm sorry but really I didn't mean anything ....

[Try To Reach]

looooooooooool

you read it wrongly

who tells you i'm not happy with your post come on

J.J

there is no a speciall member who can have the same of your coming

but you see i think my words up there were not felicitous so i'm the one
who should say sorry

J.J

plz never say sorry as you never hurt me or underestimated me

once i was proud to see you in my thread