A Tragedy of An Agony

[Meant To be]

Salam to all the lovely members in our little cozy home

Here I'd like to share my new poem with you all, I composed it last night

It's kinda an imaginary story of a scene of a very tired old lady I found lying on a sidewalk of a street

So when you read my lines, you will find out what happened to her

You will notice that this poem is different in comparasion with the previous ones, coz there will be a kinda conversation between that lady and me, so I will put it in two different colors

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A Tragedy of An Agony


By: Khalid




A skinny body in need of care
Of a helpless lady lying down there
Can't move a muscle, she could hardly talk
With a profound sigh as though of a squawk

Tears of distress, her eyes express
Nonetheless, you'll be impressed
By the heartbreak she endures
Of a world exceedingly obscure

She got nowhere to go, she can't struggle
Only the pavement is her shelter to snuggle
What made her life miserable, you will see
When you read what occurred between her & me

I sat beside her, looking into her eyes
Like she's trying to smile but in disguise
Madam! Tell me your tragedy what happened?
As I'm here to help you, it is not your end!!

In a few words, that will tell you the truth
You will hear a matter which is uncouth
My son left me on demand of his wife
She told him " Get her out of our life"

So he threw me out without any care
How could he do it how could he dare
He forgot the nights I spent awake
Just to warm him just for his sake

Alas, one day he will be reciprocated
Then he won't forget what he mistreated
Take it easy! Let me take you to a safe place
Where you can rest, to let your grief be displaced

Son! Just leave me here, I got used to it
I'm not gonna make it, I will stick to it
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She emitted her last breath,.. she DIED
Yet, with a smile mixed with a bleary-eyed

Silence prevailed in me, I got immobilized
I broke into tears which I couldn't keep inside
O God please! bless her soul, forgive her sins
And domicile her Paradise, Amen…. Amen





I hope that you like it

Your comments and criticisms are highly appreciated



Here if you wanna read it in a word document

Click Here (http://up.9q9q.net/up/index.php?f=610750wVt)

[Wiill Vandom]

oh my god I wished it ended in different way
With a happy ending
Really very touching and very common tragedy that we see it repeating over and over
Thanx for sharing such beautiful poem
And my knowledge in poetry does not allow me to criticize but I don't think that anyone can criticize such writing

[القلب الساهي]

wa alikom asalaam
your words are so affective espiecally in mother speach
but all the poem are nice

thanx a bounch and keep on

[library2]

thanks a lot
how tender this peom is

[Aseel]

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How cruel the son is

How could he forget all what she has done for him


Such kind of people don't really know the meaning of parenthood



Great poem as usual .. that evokes emotions inside of you

there is a question I wanna ask

Is that what really happened ?? 0

:(

[enigma]

What a sad reality of life


I think her son will regret his deed for the rest of his life


MTB


Our comment is the last thing you need brother


Your writings are always meaningful

[Meant To be]

oh my god I wished it ended in different way
With a happy ending
Really very touching and very common tragedy that we see it repeating over and over
Thanx for sharing such beautiful poem
And my knowledge in poetry does not allow me to criticize but I don't think that anyone can criticize such writing



Well sister, as the title of my poem shows the purport of it, so it should have such end

As you siad, we see, hear, and read such tragedies happening over and over


Thanks sister for the compliment, I really do appreciate that

[Meant To be]

wa alikom asalaam
your words are so affective espiecally in mother speach
but all the poem are nice

thanx a bounch and keep on



Thanks bro for your words

It's so nice seeing you commenting on my poem

Thanks again for passing by

[Meant To be]

thanks a lot
how tender this peom is


You're welcome


Thanks for stopping by

[Meant To be]

Such kind of people don't really know the meaning of parenthood
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there is a question I wanna ask

Is that what really happened ?? 0

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!!!Dear sister, read what you have said about such kind of people


So if you need an answer for your question, I will tell it didn't happened but I imagined that


but believe me and take my word

there are many true stories worse than what my poem shows

I remember one story happened at the Eastern region here in Saudi Arabia, had been posted by my brother TTR in another forum long time ago, you won't belive it


Thanks sister for your words and thanks for passing

[Meant To be]

What a sad reality of life


I think her son will regret his deed for the rest of his life


MTB


Our comment is the last thing you need brother


Your writings are always meaningful



!Sure he will


Sister, believe me your comments mean a lot to me

I wouldn't write more, if I didn't find people like you to read my writings


Thanks for your lovely words sister

[Try To Reach]

Dear : Khaloody

I went through it speedly and i'll return to see if i'm still alive to give an equal and suitable comment

man

what to say to you

more than

thanx for the spirit you have

[Meant To be]

Dear : Khaloody

I went through it speedly and i'll return to see if i'm still alive to give an equal and suitable comment

man

what to say to you

more than

thanx for the spirit you have



Well brother I'm honored enough this time

so till get you back again, I'll be more than glad


Thanks brother for your words