Try To Reach
01-06-2007, 02:28 AM
I have written this story three or four years ago
so if is there any grammar mistakes plz never mention it looooooool
:36_1_67[1]:
here (http://www.saudienglish.net/vb/showthread.php?t=18461)you'll find the same story in Arabic
it was late night .
When I was walking through the streets, I was thinking of what to buy !
I tried to remember what my mother told me to buy, damn !! she will got angry if I came home without what she asked me to get !
In my way, and while I was reminding what to buy …
I passed by some kind of truck it is a " jeep" I guess !
but apparently it was moving.
The car was moving !!!!! Do you read me??? the car was moving slowly from right to left and the other way around !!!
Nobody were there no one in the street except myself !! Also, the street was dark and no lamps were there
which makes it terrifying me before that shit started to move !
So, my heart starts his job beating at a high level ! so strong too hard !! trembling
Actually, it was a terrible situation because, I still at the beginning of the street and there is a long journey I have to do a crossing that evil street and to go through it !
I dare to give a step after step and the car still silent no sounds no moving
For the Eleventh step, or say so, I felt as the car revert to move again but, this time sound comes out sound like a moaning so I give my feet a little bit of courageous and weeeeeeeer foreerra ! running through the
street as a crazy guy
.By the End of the street I felt save I felt ok ! everything is all right except the money !
I have lost my mother's money in that evil street I won't come back to it again
Will at least this night !
.
.
.
.
.
.
coming back home imagine the situation you will laugh at me !! but I won't talk any further…
next day , afternoon :.
the next day in a daylight I returned to that street. Of course I have company this time, the people around me I talk to this I talk to that.. everything is ok !
.
So now I can check out this scary car and scary street !
Therefore, I watched that car which made me terrifying
last night ! in fact I gave it a glance no more ! I dare not to get near from it
.
Anyway, it is still there ! I wonder who is the owner of it, and why he parks it there with no cars !
.
I asked some of my friends to help me waiting for anyone to come and drive this horrible car !
.
.
5 minutes later,
.
He " my friend" tells me : why you want to wait for this car ?
I've got astonished what to say to him !
.
suddenly I found something !
.
I said to him : yes I'm waiting for this car in order to know it belongs to who ?
.
what a smart answer huh !
.
He fires me another stupid question by saying: why you want to see its owner do you have anything to say to him ??
Well ! what to say now if I answered him again he won't stop questioning ! so I totally ignored him!
.
He return with the same question ! now I answered him in abridgment saying !
If you want to wait with me please keep silent otherwise, you can go !
.
He gives a strong react by saying
What a stupidity from you dear liquid milk !!
do you think I'm a fool one to be led by the nose
to the hell dear to the hell ( or say so !
.
I said thank you ( yejee menak Akthar !
.
I continued waiting for any clue that might help me know what makes that car moving last night but unconsciously, I walked and have looked at the ground searching for the money I have lost last night and I forgot that it was afternoon and people can't left such 50 riyals dancing on the floor!
All the morning !!
.
do you think so !!
.
After one completely slowly and wearily hour I decided to return to the same street at night but first, I will search for a new friend to help me instead of that angry one.
.
It will be a crazy night I will take my weapon which include
5 RBGs , 21 stinger missiles , 10 grenades and 15 c4
.
With a stench from my back
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End of part 1.
so if is there any grammar mistakes plz never mention it looooooool
:36_1_67[1]:
here (http://www.saudienglish.net/vb/showthread.php?t=18461)you'll find the same story in Arabic
it was late night .
When I was walking through the streets, I was thinking of what to buy !
I tried to remember what my mother told me to buy, damn !! she will got angry if I came home without what she asked me to get !
In my way, and while I was reminding what to buy …
I passed by some kind of truck it is a " jeep" I guess !
but apparently it was moving.
The car was moving !!!!! Do you read me??? the car was moving slowly from right to left and the other way around !!!
Nobody were there no one in the street except myself !! Also, the street was dark and no lamps were there
which makes it terrifying me before that shit started to move !
So, my heart starts his job beating at a high level ! so strong too hard !! trembling
Actually, it was a terrible situation because, I still at the beginning of the street and there is a long journey I have to do a crossing that evil street and to go through it !
I dare to give a step after step and the car still silent no sounds no moving
For the Eleventh step, or say so, I felt as the car revert to move again but, this time sound comes out sound like a moaning so I give my feet a little bit of courageous and weeeeeeeer foreerra ! running through the
street as a crazy guy
.By the End of the street I felt save I felt ok ! everything is all right except the money !
I have lost my mother's money in that evil street I won't come back to it again
Will at least this night !
.
.
.
.
.
.
coming back home imagine the situation you will laugh at me !! but I won't talk any further…
next day , afternoon :.
the next day in a daylight I returned to that street. Of course I have company this time, the people around me I talk to this I talk to that.. everything is ok !
.
So now I can check out this scary car and scary street !
Therefore, I watched that car which made me terrifying
last night ! in fact I gave it a glance no more ! I dare not to get near from it
.
Anyway, it is still there ! I wonder who is the owner of it, and why he parks it there with no cars !
.
I asked some of my friends to help me waiting for anyone to come and drive this horrible car !
.
.
5 minutes later,
.
He " my friend" tells me : why you want to wait for this car ?
I've got astonished what to say to him !
.
suddenly I found something !
.
I said to him : yes I'm waiting for this car in order to know it belongs to who ?
.
what a smart answer huh !
.
He fires me another stupid question by saying: why you want to see its owner do you have anything to say to him ??
Well ! what to say now if I answered him again he won't stop questioning ! so I totally ignored him!
.
He return with the same question ! now I answered him in abridgment saying !
If you want to wait with me please keep silent otherwise, you can go !
.
He gives a strong react by saying
What a stupidity from you dear liquid milk !!
do you think I'm a fool one to be led by the nose
to the hell dear to the hell ( or say so !
.
I said thank you ( yejee menak Akthar !
.
I continued waiting for any clue that might help me know what makes that car moving last night but unconsciously, I walked and have looked at the ground searching for the money I have lost last night and I forgot that it was afternoon and people can't left such 50 riyals dancing on the floor!
All the morning !!
.
do you think so !!
.
After one completely slowly and wearily hour I decided to return to the same street at night but first, I will search for a new friend to help me instead of that angry one.
.
It will be a crazy night I will take my weapon which include
5 RBGs , 21 stinger missiles , 10 grenades and 15 c4
.
With a stench from my back
:1 (124):
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.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
End of part 1.