the past

[little angel 14]

hey everyone
i wrote somethig before and
i hope you like it
(if there any any mistakes please tell me)

when you look at your self in the mirrorthan you reember the life and what she did it to you from the pain. when the pain wanted to leave he gave you gift not normal gif it's the hurt
whan you look to the other sideyou feel so happy because you were fighting with much and much of brave.

[Palestinian Pearl]

Oh, honey !

what you wrote was very great and had warm senses

but as your comment ,, I'll try to guide you to your mistakes in my point of view






when you look at your self in the mirrorthan you reember the life and what she did it to you from the pain.

when the pain wanted to leave he gave you gift not normal gif it's the hurt

whan you look to the other side you feel so happy because you were fighting with much and much of brave.




when you look to yourself in the mirror, you remember the life and what it did to you from the pain. ( what it learnt you from the pain ) maybe it's better


when you look to yourself in the mirror that it remind you with the life and what it learnt you from the pain

or

when you look to your self in the mirror whenever it remind you with the life and what it learnt you from the pain


when the pain wanted to leave you, it gave you a gift which is not normal .. it's the hurt


when you look to the other side, you feel so happy because you were fighting with much and
much of brave

Keep the good work up ,honey!

May Allah bless you ..

and we are proud of you

with BEST wishes and have a bright future

your sister,

Palestinian Pearl

[little angel 14]

thank you so much for help
and thank you so much for everything

[Meant To be]

Nice writing, and it might be true


Our sister Palestanian Pearl did a great job


Thanks for sharing such feeling with us


Bless you

[little angel 14]

thanks for visiting my tobic
i wrote it becausre i know you care about my writing

Good luck

little angel

[مخاوي الدمعه]

Well done

[little angel 14]

thank you so much

[sarooooo]

It is nice
thanks

[little angel 14]

thank you a lot

[Try To Reach]

Your Highness

So beautiful dear little angel 14
and thanx for our sister's ( Palestinian Pearl ) added

we are so happy to have you both among us

be always flying you butterflies in this Club


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[Palestinian Pearl]

It's not me who did a great job

It's my lovely sister little angel , indeed

;) Thanks sweetie again and we wait your creative writings

with my love,

your sister

[Wiill Vandom]

Thanx our little angel
keep going and trying
perfectness comes by practicing

[little angel 14]

thank you so much
sister:little angel 14