مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Memory
habeeb
20-07-2007, 04:16 PM
I Can Remember Our Sorrow,i Can Remember Our LaughteR;
I Know Surely We Kissed And Cried And Ate Together;
I Remember Our Places And Games,and Plans We Had-----
The Title House And How All Came To Nahght------
Remember Well::
But I Cannot Remember Our Love ,,
I Cannot Remember Our Love....
a girl
21-07-2007, 11:24 AM
why???
he can remember
everything except his love??
it's sad
thank u for the post
habeeb
22-07-2007, 06:47 AM
thanks alot dear girl honestlly u r soooooooo sweet to read mine
accept my best regards
Aseel
22-07-2007, 06:47 PM
So nice
, Well, if he remebers all of that
if he remembers the sorrow and the laughter, the kisses and the place the went to
then ,sure, he remembers that LOVE
:)
enigma
03-08-2007, 09:17 PM
habeeb
I think all of these memories are part of that love , aren't they? o
Try To Reach
23-08-2007, 02:08 AM
habeeb
How are you pal
plz bear with us my friend we want the good for ya
its so beautiful to write such thing but as Aseel and enigma said
Why ? since you remind every thing related to Love
but not the love itself
i can see what you mean but keep in mind that the poems has its own readers
that read such thing as a contradiction "Sorry" but for me it is a sweet contradiction believe me
at any rate, you have to take care when writing again
especially your title
let us see more my friend
you are the best
best wishes
زهرة وفى
23-08-2007, 02:53 AM
Oh, Pity darling
It is sorrow poem
thanks my dear
accpet my passing
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