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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Missing life



fona_85
29-09-2007, 08:53 PM
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I missed something in my life
Something makes me fly
Makes me free
Something takes my soul and my sight

I prefer to be a butterfly
Play up and down the tree
How lucky is she
She doesnt lie

Happiness everywhere around me
However how do I like to be
Alive, hide, or die
Who knows what I missed in my life!!



I hope you enjoy it
and
:23_11_56[1]: if I have grammar mistakes
It's just a beginning

Doha ya Doha
30-09-2007, 02:18 PM
mashallah fona its wonderful
keeeeeeeeeeeeeep going
:clapping:

i'm also a beginner like u
:36_11_21[1]:

good luck dear...and waiting 4 more

Aseel
30-09-2007, 06:01 PM
Masha Allah

Seems that we have new talented people here :)


I have just finished reading a short poem written by Doha


Fona

I would say the same

you have the talent

So keep it up


Waiting for more as Doha said

:)


Best wishes


Aseel

fona_85
30-09-2007, 07:34 PM
Thank you Doha & Aseel for passing through my page
I hope you really like it
and I promise you to try and try to do something better

enigma
25-10-2007, 03:08 PM
There's a spiritual light in this post that enlightened me

Thanks for it's beauty dear

Keep it up

حـلـم انـسـانـه
25-10-2007, 03:40 PM
We missed in our life Love and Cooperation that make us face problems

It is very nice poem

Thanks alot

fona_85
26-10-2007, 01:06 AM
There's a spiritual light in this post that enlightened me

Thanks for it's beauty dear

Keep it up

Thanx dear for passing
l hope that you really liked it

fona_85
26-10-2007, 01:13 AM
We missed in our life Love and Cooperation that make us face problems

It is very nice poem

Thanks alot

Thank you
you are really push me step forward by your comments

lady maha
26-10-2007, 03:11 AM
so beautifull
thanks my darlig

fona_85
26-10-2007, 09:46 PM
Thanx Lady Maha

you are more welcomed

naji
29-10-2007, 11:45 PM
It's realy great

رساويه
30-10-2007, 12:53 AM
it is a great poem

keep going

fona_85
30-10-2007, 01:23 AM
naji

&

رساوية

Thanx for passing by