مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Missing life
fona_85
29-09-2007, 08:53 PM
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I missed something in my life
Something makes me fly
Makes me free
Something takes my soul and my sight
I prefer to be a butterfly
Play up and down the tree
How lucky is she
She doesnt lie
Happiness everywhere around me
However how do I like to be
Alive, hide, or die
Who knows what I missed in my life!!
I hope you enjoy it
and
:23_11_56[1]: if I have grammar mistakes
It's just a beginning
Doha ya Doha
30-09-2007, 02:18 PM
mashallah fona its wonderful
keeeeeeeeeeeeeep going
:clapping:
i'm also a beginner like u
:36_11_21[1]:
good luck dear...and waiting 4 more
Aseel
30-09-2007, 06:01 PM
Masha Allah
Seems that we have new talented people here :)
I have just finished reading a short poem written by Doha
Fona
I would say the same
you have the talent
So keep it up
Waiting for more as Doha said
:)
Best wishes
Aseel
fona_85
30-09-2007, 07:34 PM
Thank you Doha & Aseel for passing through my page
I hope you really like it
and I promise you to try and try to do something better
enigma
25-10-2007, 03:08 PM
There's a spiritual light in this post that enlightened me
Thanks for it's beauty dear
Keep it up
حـلـم انـسـانـه
25-10-2007, 03:40 PM
We missed in our life Love and Cooperation that make us face problems
It is very nice poem
Thanks alot
fona_85
26-10-2007, 01:06 AM
There's a spiritual light in this post that enlightened me
Thanks for it's beauty dear
Keep it up
Thanx dear for passing
l hope that you really liked it
fona_85
26-10-2007, 01:13 AM
We missed in our life Love and Cooperation that make us face problems
It is very nice poem
Thanks alot
Thank you
you are really push me step forward by your comments
lady maha
26-10-2007, 03:11 AM
so beautifull
thanks my darlig
fona_85
26-10-2007, 09:46 PM
Thanx Lady Maha
you are more welcomed
رساويه
30-10-2007, 12:53 AM
it is a great poem
keep going
fona_85
30-10-2007, 01:23 AM
naji
&
رساوية
Thanx for passing by
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