An English Poem

[Reckless]

It's one of my poems which I hope you will like

Mixed feelings of love and hate


i was happy when you loved me
and sad when you left me
i felt the joy in happiness
and i have tasted the tears of sadness
once i was flying in your freedom
but now i am jailed in your kingdom
those days were like heaven
but now i am sleeping in a coffin
you were my warm sun
but now it is too hot to run
every time i see your picture on the wall
i feel mixed that i wanna stumble and fall

[مــلك الحرف]

that is very nice and cool

Thanks for this nice words

[فـصوولي]

sah ur tongue :bleh:

[fona_85]

sah ur tongue

ههههههههههههههههههههههه حلوه


i was happy when you loved me
and sad when you left me
i felt the joy in happiness
and i have tasted the tears of sadness
once i was flying in your freedom
but now i am jailed in your kingdom
those days were like heaven
but now i am sleeping in a coffin
you were my warm sun
but now it is too hot to run
every time i see your picture on the wall
i feel mixed that i wanna stumble and fall

wonderful words
thanx alot

[Reckless]

Thanks so much

[فشاشه منحاشه]

Wo0o0o0o0o0oW

WONDERFUL
Go a head

[البـارع]

once i was flying in your freedom
but now i am jailed in your kingdom


you are welcome darling

that's a cute poem:109:

thanks for sharing it with us

and waiting for your coming up masterpieces:233:

[جمون]

i felt the joy in happiness
and i have tasted the tears of sadness




emotional words!!



i like it


go ahead my brother/sister

[Reckless]

Thanks for your words

you really embarrased me

[Aseel]

So, we have another talented person here :)


It's a beautiful poem


You knew how to use the words


to experess your feelings


Good luck and waiting for more :)





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[Stream]

Big thakss for u

[oJgJI JIjJj]

Thats great
Thanks so much

[إشراقـة فجـر]

Fantastic Poem

Thaaaaaaanks a lot

[M!SS ROZE]

wonderful




thaaaaxxxxxxx

[library2]

you're a poet
you can transform feeling into words
thanks a lot for the nice poem
go on and remember to share us

[Reckless]

Thanks sooo much i appreciate it

[JIC]

thank so much

[Lovely Rose]

Thanks



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[NoVeL]

wonderful....
writ more and i'm very interested in your poems..
good luck

warm break