Hey i am glad that i am here again

[Reckless]

Hey my friends i like poetry and i have read some of the poems here and they are really cool , so i wanna share with u some of my poems and i hope u really like them , please tell me your opnions about them so i can write more they are really from a real feeling and experience from a feeling of hate and love and sometimes neglect ,,


Whispers Of The Heart

Feelings come and go
but your love stays on
please don't say no
to my love that i havn't shown
there is nothing i can't do
to me you have gone
you were my love, yeah you
it is torturing me to the bone
this pain is growing so slow
sometimes i wanna call you on the phone
i feel cold when i see the snow
it is hard to be cold and alone
don't leave me standing on my toe
because i need your love to carry on





The Past

Life is like big tunnel
you go through it so fast
every memory switches like a channel
each one didn't last
i am scared of this dark road
this road road reminds me of the past
every thing I've said or told
a sad play oh! i am one of the cast
a feeling can't be sold
the past is following me so fast
like an old man with a hand so cold
patting on my shoulder as i sat
this memory , this page i can't fold
i wish my past is dead and won't last
killing the happiness in me, as i am getting old

[Aseel]

Wonderful , dear


specially the second one


I liked it so much


It's so expressive and full of pain


It's so sad and just indicates how harsh this life can be



Keep it up, dear

Waiting to read more poems written by you

[enigma]

Thanks for sharing your writings dear