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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : ... I wanted to



Try To Reach
10-11-2007, 06:11 PM
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read slowly


I wanted to
kiss the
bundles of stars
in your face



I wanted to
smooth the
rough edges of your
skin


weaved with mine
so full of
hidden pain
and
boyish innocence


I wanted to
melt into your
warm white walls


I didn't want to leave you


the heavens watched us
while we slept
in those cold
January nights


angels
full of
envy
above us


I suppose they
wanted you
to become
a fleeting blotch
of red
in my heart


I suppose
the whispers of
fate
decided to
change us


I didn't want to leave you


I always tasted the
sweetness
of your skin


as if for the last time
with gentle fingers
and sleepy eyes
we fell in love


I always tangled the
stars in your hair
I always kissed
the scars on your hands


as if I knew
we were going to
die


the angels have
you
now


the man I loved
and I have
sorrow
and
one million pictures of you
lodged in my chest






For Sean
by jenawin

Aseel
11-11-2007, 05:11 PM
Deep emotions were implemented in that poem


Great was the love that once gathered their hearts


I always find joy in reading poetry


It's something that touches the heart and the soul


An excellent choice, dear brother


Thank you for letting me read such a poem


Best wishes

البـارع
12-11-2007, 09:57 AM
angels
full of
envy
above us


I suppose they
wanted you
to become
a fleeting blotch
of red
in my heart
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!!

I enjoyed reading this poem, which was sweet and emotional

It expresses my own feelings about someone

Tanks a lot darling

Meant To be
12-11-2007, 03:08 PM
the man I loved
and I have
sorrow
and
one million pictures of you
lodged in my chest



!!!!?isn't this stanza unbelievable

I loved the poem so much, really did, and I don't find it queer when it posts by you dude :) O

I think I've been far away from reading poems, I've lost their taste ;) O

A million thank buddy for such wonderful poem


Bless ya

sarouna
12-11-2007, 06:17 PM
I always tasted the
sweetness
of your skin

as if for the last time
with gentle fingers
and sleepy eyes
we fell in love

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Really Wonderful poem

It's full of deep emotion

I really enjoyed reading it

Thanks try for sharing it with us

Best regards


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E.T.Reem
13-11-2007, 11:05 PM
wonderful poem

thanks alot Try

It is realy full of emotions
and fellings

May Allah bless you

* Keep up the good work ...... you are perfect *

الطيب الحبوب
14-11-2007, 11:54 PM
you r great
nice words

enigma
15-11-2007, 05:44 PM
Regardless of anything else

I loved the beautiful images

Thanks try for your sense

fona_85
15-11-2007, 08:39 PM
wonderful verses
thanx alot try to reach
for ur choice

Try To Reach
19-11-2007, 10:04 PM
many good friends here

thanx for every plural one

I should return again to here

to fill up my own eyes

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