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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : A poem I read and wanted to share



The Seeker
17-05-2005, 12:36 AM
Looking For The Sun
by Nikki
I hope I never have to suffer
The way you do.
And I don't even know
How much life deserted you.

My misery is just a joke
Compared to what you must feel.
My greatest fear is an illusion,
To you, your fear is real.

You cry for help,
But you know they don't hear.
They're just too far
when you thought they were near.

You see no light
And you gave up on looking for the sun
Cause you need miracles
To come along - to find it.

زهرة وفى
17-05-2005, 12:49 AM
hi seeker
thanks for this opoem
keep on and let us pleasure when we are reading
i wish for you haapy life

Abo Lama
17-05-2005, 01:40 AM
the seeker

thanks alot


keep on plz

befor THE after
17-05-2005, 02:22 AM
nice start The Seeker

keep on

tnx

daydreamer
17-05-2005, 04:27 AM
very nice the seeker

Instigator
17-05-2005, 05:44 AM
,You cry for help
.but you know they don't hear
They're just too far
.when you thought they were near


.It is so wonderful poem

Thank you so much, The Seeker
.So, carry on, please

still_alive
17-05-2005, 11:10 AM
Thanks Seeker for this nice poem

keep on please

.Your sis

The Seeker
17-05-2005, 02:37 PM
Thanks brothers and sisters your comments are of much significance to me. I promise you will be reading some of my writing soon.