مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : A short Poem I wrote
The Seeker
21-05-2005, 07:32 PM
Hey there,
This is a rough draft of a short poem I wrote. Thought it would be helpful if you read it and gave your wise comments.
I thought my heart was fortified.
So it won’t yield for a look from your eyes.
Yet, oh wicked witch,
You kept casting your spells kiss after kiss.
Until my heart submitted to your every wish.
still_alive
21-05-2005, 07:54 PM
wow ma shaa Allah
very nice
that was a very perfect writing bro
keep on please you have the talent to write poems
really you have
ma shaa Allah
wish you all he best
.Your sis
Seeker
...... I like your words
They are realy meaningful
Gooooooooo onnnnnnn
Abo Lama
21-05-2005, 10:24 PM
the seeker
thanx alot my brother for ur meaningful poem
u`ve got the skill and u should work on developing it
i`m sure u`ll
keep on plz
The Seeker
21-05-2005, 11:19 PM
Thanks alot my freinds your comments meant alot to me. My Allah Bless you.
Hi the seeker
it is nice but you seem to be a lover Good Luck Is it possible to know is going be your princess to congratulate you cause we are all members here.
Wish you the best
Instigator
22-05-2005, 02:42 PM
.Nice words
Thanks
keeeeeeeeep onnnnnnnnnnnn
اسيــ حبه ــرة
26-05-2005, 03:13 PM
Nice words
all the members here have the ability to say
poem... Because the are so romantic persons
Thanks bro, keep on that standard
i wish i got it as they did.but im sorrrrry
can u explain it 4 me plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Thanx The seeker
may Allah bless u
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