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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : my poem that i wrote



نت زعيم
22-12-2007, 12:58 AM
Day burns down to the night
Burns the edge of my soul.....

In the night I break into
sparks of suns.....

And become fires end
the dust of bones.....

In the night I see
the real concealed.....
In the days bright
.....lie

Eyes stitched shuit
white teeth smile.....

Sleep walks, and talks
and feet mark time
...........................................
.....

مليت
22-12-2007, 01:04 AM
wow good one za3eem

kepp it up bro.

i wish i see more

مهاني88
22-12-2007, 02:36 AM
ا ايام دونت اندر ستاند اني ثنق
بت ثانك يوووو
مهاني88

نت زعيم
22-12-2007, 04:29 AM
wow good one za3eem

kepp it up bro.

i wish i see more


thank you so much,

for supporting me...:36_11_21[1]:

i'm tring to finsh next poem


besise, before i forget, thank you for passing,:124:

love you:p

نت زعيم
22-12-2007, 04:36 AM
ا ايام دونت اندر ستاند اني ثنق
بت ثانك يوووو
مهاني88


commmmme onnnn

:neutral:

hi, dear, whyn't you share with us

ur poems , sotries,... anthin' :marsa20:which

is written from you..

oaaooookaayy
:74:
thanks for passing

love you:p

NoVeL
22-12-2007, 07:29 AM
why Days are burns
but really i've to say wow
go on and let's see more from ur wonderful poems

warm break

نت زعيم
23-12-2007, 01:15 AM
why Days are burns
but really i've to say wow
go on and let's see more from ur wonderful poems

warm break





thank you so much dear

you really really encourage me to write more

more, and mooooore

i'm writing another poem ,

Sooner or later, I'm goin' share it with

our members