مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : my poem that i wrote
نت زعيم
22-12-2007, 12:58 AM
Day burns down to the night
Burns the edge of my soul.....
In the night I break into
sparks of suns.....
And become fires end
the dust of bones.....
In the night I see
the real concealed.....
In the days bright
.....lie
Eyes stitched shuit
white teeth smile.....
Sleep walks, and talks
and feet mark time
...........................................
.....
wow good one za3eem
kepp it up bro.
i wish i see more
مهاني88
22-12-2007, 02:36 AM
ا ايام دونت اندر ستاند اني ثنق
بت ثانك يوووو
مهاني88
نت زعيم
22-12-2007, 04:29 AM
wow good one za3eem
kepp it up bro.
i wish i see more
thank you so much,
for supporting me...:36_11_21[1]:
i'm tring to finsh next poem
besise, before i forget, thank you for passing,:124:
love you:p
نت زعيم
22-12-2007, 04:36 AM
ا ايام دونت اندر ستاند اني ثنق
بت ثانك يوووو
مهاني88
commmmme onnnn
:neutral:
hi, dear, whyn't you share with us
ur poems , sotries,... anthin' :marsa20:which
is written from you..
oaaooookaayy
:74:
thanks for passing
love you:p
NoVeL
22-12-2007, 07:29 AM
why Days are burns
but really i've to say wow
go on and let's see more from ur wonderful poems
warm break
نت زعيم
23-12-2007, 01:15 AM
why Days are burns
but really i've to say wow
go on and let's see more from ur wonderful poems
warm break
thank you so much dear
you really really encourage me to write more
more, and mooooore
i'm writing another poem ,
Sooner or later, I'm goin' share it with
our members
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