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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : i promise you



cage
11-03-2008, 08:59 PM
I promise you.. that I wont cry anymore…
I promise you that I wont think about you
I wont kiss you when you sleep
I wont hold your hand when you feel afraid
I wont hug you when you need me
I wont listen when you need someone to hear you
Never show you how much I love you
Never prove to you how much I care
I was there all the times
I was your home
And your only place
I used to say I love you before you say it to me
I used to sing to you before you sleep
I used to touch your hair and show you that you are my baby love
I kissed you when you needed someone to kiss
I fought with you when you wanted someone to fight with
How could that happened to us
How could that ever changed
I am not now the one you knew before
I am not now your love
I am not now the only one for you
It can not be! .. we are not that lovers who used to kiss each other
Under the moon light
In the cold nights
I promise you that I wont cry anymore
I promise you that I wont think about you
I hope and pray you will find the right one for you
You weren’t the good one for me
You didn’t worth it
I didn’t worth your love
You didn’t deserve me
I didn’t deserve you
I promise you that I wont cry anymore
I promise you that I wont think about you
I promise you… it wont be another
You were the first and you will be the last.

Aseel
11-03-2008, 09:47 PM
A beautiful, touching poem but so sad :(



It's painful to end a relationship that meant a lot you once


The writer seems to be suffering for ending that story of love



And in spite of all the pain felt there, he ended the poem


with



I promise you… it wont be another
You were the first and you will be the last.

cage
12-03-2008, 12:46 AM
thank you so much for your wonderful words.... and thank you for reading my feelings here...

alraad3
12-03-2008, 01:00 AM
thank you for your touching poem. butttttttttt, Does she deserve all these promises?
Is there a kind of love holding such idealism?

الواثقة بالله
12-03-2008, 03:06 PM
Nice One
accept
my
regards

E.T.Reem
12-03-2008, 06:21 PM
cage


great words & great feelings

thanks alot


accept my passing

cage
14-03-2008, 04:39 PM
HELLO DEARS.. am so happy that i am sharing my feelings with you all here... it's my pleasure realy.. i love you all... but i am A GIRL i'm not a man :( ... hope and pray everyone is good insha allah..

CAGE

ابواصيل
14-03-2008, 04:57 PM
wooooooooooooooooow
it's realy nice and sad End .

I hope you will delete ( won't) and put ( will ) 4ever.

ميميm
15-03-2008, 12:26 AM
thank u so much these words are very nice
thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank u again<

M!SS ROZE
16-03-2008, 06:03 PM
oh my heart
nice work
keeep on

BloumagrieT
16-03-2008, 10:22 PM
cage

thanx for such a wonderful poem

^^

low voice
18-03-2008, 12:59 PM
sensitive poem thank you
accept my regarding

fona_85
20-03-2008, 10:04 PM
Touching words

thanx alot for these lines
one can feel the purity that lies among them

you are really talented
keep it up

accept my passing
fona

~.:_E-crazy_:.~
27-03-2008, 05:30 PM
thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank you

ريما الحسين
04-04-2008, 04:08 AM
[
COLOR="DarkOrchid"]what a nice lines thanks a lot honey

accept my regards[/COLOR]