a new poem I need your opinions and your comments

[FUTUREDREAM]

THE DIAMOND
Her name is Samar
But she is not like the summer
Like the spring in her appearance
She is really generous

When my first visit to school
She was not so cool
She welcomed me so much
And I am really grateful so much

No one really like her
Here, there or anywhere
She was very kind to me
Come to school if you want to see

I am really shy from her
For she was always there
If I want anything she never becomes late
It was my wonderful fate
That made me meet
A person of this spirit
While I was not sure
To come at such door

All teachers were really nice
But Samar there is no one like
She is always there for anyone
Because she is really helpful
She bore me a lot
Without saying the word " oh me…not"

The word " thank you " is not enough
If I only say it I would be rough
I ask my God to get you what you want
But to forget me please not

I will miss you in the coming days
But of course I will remember you with sun rays
::small:futuredream

[ريما الحسين]

you have a great choice I really enjoyed with your poem

thanks :smile (40):

[FUTUREDREAM]

thank you very much for your opinion

[LightofMoon]

In fact, I don't have a good taste in poem. I felt it's more porse than poem!I don't mean to break you at all. This is what I felt!

Your sister

[FUTUREDREAM]

thank you my sister for your opinion. but I studied English poem for 4 years and it's written in such way.
thank you again.