Happiness

[postgraduate]

Happiness


I try to draw the sky,,,Every moment of my life is little bit shy,,Although the feelings inside of me telling me why?I see that my dreams ,my aims want all to fly ,,I suddenly feel I want to cry,,I cry to keep the happiness mine,,but forget that those moments are fine,,I begin to draw a line,,to make sure if my feelings towardes th sky shine. Shy,,why,,fly could you please tell my moments the way to the sky?I may not need any more to draw a line!to see my feelings towares something else shine . what is the sky?it is you honey.where is the sun?This is my love for you my lovely.Have you ever seen a sky without sun?That is you and me when we become only one...


Thanks..

[البـارع]

I think the sensation of happiness starts from our insides. So, we have the key to be happy or unhappy
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Thanks a lot Postgraduate

[ريما الحسين]

thanks alot for your topic :smile (40):

[ferras11]

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaw.It really nice

[•0سحآبة خِير0•]

Have you ever seen a sky without sun?That is you and me when we become only one...


Nice From U

Thanx Dear

[BloumagrieT]

what is the sky?it is you honey.where is the sun?This is my love for you my lovely.Have you ever seen a sky without sun?That is you and me when we become only one...


postgraduate


nice lines

they carry a sweet and tendre feeling within them

thanks 4 sharing them with us

welcome to the club

hope you enjoy being among

your brothers and sisters


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[أميرة بأخلاقها@]

postgraduate

nice words which come from your feelings and touch our feelings

thanks for sharing them with us

[غربة احساس]

thanks

reallly it's very great topic

[postgraduate]

I am sooo glad to have you right here..Thanks for your sweet passing.

[CHARLES DICKENS]

I try to draw the sky,,,
Every moment of my life is little bit shy,,
Although the feelings inside of me telling me why?
I see that my dreams ,my aims want all to fly ,,
I suddenly feel I want to cry,,
I cry to keep the happiness mine,,
but forget that those moments are fine,,
I begin to draw a line,,
to make sure if my feelings towardes th sky shine.
Shy,,why,,fly
could you please tell my moments the way to the sky?
I may not need any more to draw a line!
to see my feelings towares something else shine .
what is the sky....?.....it is you honey.where is the sun
?
This is my love for you my lovely
Have you ever seen a sky without sun
?
That is you and me when we become only one
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You definitely have poetic potential....You're really a young poet or poetess who's life is waiting to catch her or his poetic rays
my advice though i'm not a poetess is to read poetry more and more
I hope you all the best dear
Your sis
Mona Dickens
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[postgraduate]

thanks dear for your sweet passing.Although I'm not that much of poetry,your lovely words mean alot to me.Thanks again