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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Story By ME ^_^



M.o_o.N
05-12-2008, 09:15 PM
I heard this story from my dad in Arabic and I loved it so much, so I said why not to write it in English
and this is it :) my own words in a sweet meaningful story, yep say Mashaa Allah lol...
Enjoy reading it..

Holes

once in old times there was a nervous young man, always get angry from people around him. When he in anger mood he used to insult and revile peoples.

His father tried to help him, so he found a solution for his son problem. He built a wall then he asked his son to hammer a nail when he get angry. The son listened to his father advice and he started to do so. At the first week there were 30nails.second week22nails,third week 15nails and it decreased at the fourth week to be 3nails.

The son came to his father happy and blissful. He said to his father "My nervous are ok ,I can control my nervous now thank you father".

The father asked his son to take off 1 nail every day he hold's his anger. After one month the son told his father that he took off all the nails.

When both reached to the wall, the father said:
"Dear my son see that little nails it made small holes in a big wall. Its just like humans hearts that you hurt. The holes will never go".


All rights received to ME lol

FOR those who gonna copy it:::
If you gonna copy it , please at least mention my nickname and do pray for me.
:smile (101):

الواثقة بالله
05-12-2008, 09:31 PM
Nice story

awesome


thanks Reona

البـارع
05-12-2008, 10:17 PM
an important lesson was learned from this wise story
thanks renoa

BloumagrieT
05-12-2008, 10:23 PM
Peace and blessing upon our sweet

Renoa

Masha'a Allah

Masha'a Allah

Masha'a Allah

Is it enough

^^

It's a great story and it contains lots of wisdom

May Allah protect you and reward you dear for all of your good deeds

Thanks

Try To Reach
05-12-2008, 10:34 PM
Each story should contains a message

and we got the message here

thanx for sharing

thanx dear

but let me before i go correct some mistakes here

you wrote peoples and the correct one is to write people

and you wrote also the following

"My nervous are ok ,I can control my nervous now


and the correct form for such sentence is to write like this



My temper is ok now I can control it

without repetition


Great Job dear sister Renoa

you did well

keen on

mother of 4girl
05-12-2008, 10:55 PM
moral lesson we learned
Thank u

M.o_o.N
06-12-2008, 12:18 AM
نسيم
thank you , glad that you like it :smile (76):

البـارع
Thank you too :smile (71):

SoOoSoOo
Awwwww my sweet sweet sister ^_^
now I'm sure that my story is really good
thank you so much dear
:smile2 (2):

Try To Reach
:smile (32): Ugh
Wow , thanks that was a very good point, I got it now :smile2 (1):
thank you so much brother ^_^

mother of 4girl
you are most welcome dear:smile (81):

DR AHLAIN
06-12-2008, 01:02 AM
Renoa



Great job sister...keep on and try to practice translation skill

I'm sure one day you'll be a well known translator

:)

أميرة بأخلاقها@
06-12-2008, 01:29 AM
well done dear

It's glamorous

keep up dear

M.o_o.N
06-12-2008, 09:44 PM
DR AHLAIN

thank you so much for these nice words
Jazaka Allah khaira bro
^_^


أميرة بأخلاقها@
thank you sweety
Hope you enjoyd reading it

Have fun

Reena
06-12-2008, 11:14 PM
Reoa

Great Idea,, I liked it

Lots of Thanx

ريما الحسين
06-12-2008, 11:18 PM
woooow mashallah so wonderful

so , keep it up sweet

wish u all the best

M.o_o.N
07-12-2008, 04:09 PM
ريما الحسين
thank YoU SwEeT SisTeR
^_^

special miss
20-05-2009, 06:48 PM
[CENTER]Wow, my dear!
You eally have a beautiful style. I liked the stpory so much and I loved its moral lesson.
You really Have a gift (ما شاء الله)
:smile (71):/CENTER]

gentel lady
20-05-2009, 07:47 PM
thanks alot
My dear
its very nice story

M.o_o.N
20-05-2009, 11:36 PM
special miss


gentel lady

thank you so much I really enjoyed reading your comments ^__^

The tolerant
22-05-2009, 12:11 PM
nice story
God bless you
keep on