Dying : first post

[aboabed3]

Dying

The pain you put me through is unbearable
It torments every tiny part of me
I feel immobilized, I feel incapable
The pain imprisoned me when I felt free

I'm walking through those defaced people
To the void, tormenting deadly life
For the first time I feel unable
To go on, unable to strive

The profound ugliness of my future
That if I really had one
Is full of pain, misery and torture
Agonizing darkness, no place for the sun

You stabbed me, left me in the cold
Wishing for the uncoming death
Life is undesirable and bold
When happiness became just a myth

I'm bleeding, waiting for my time
Shaking, aching, my feelings are numb
Come and finish me, it ain't a crime
I need your merciful death, please come!!

[BloumagrieT]

aboabed3

Though your words are full of pain and suffer

and the view is so dark and without colours

but still it's beautiful

Allow me to welcome you

I could foresee a new comer who's capable of writing

good pieces that we'll enjoy


Keep gonig brother

[aboabed3]

aboabed3

Though your words are full of pain and suffer

and the view is so dark and without colours

but still it's beautiful

Allow me to welcome you

I could foresee a new comer who's capable of writing

good pieces that we'll enjoy


Keep gonig brother




Thanks for replying

I hope my post didn't give a bad first impression as a gloomy person

[rose rani]

welcome to the club
very painful words
i hope that no body in this world feel pain like that
thank u so much for this poem

[Na.Na]

Ouch!!!! What a painful poem but indeed beautiful and strong at the same time.
I loved reading it ,thank you and welcome to the club.

[الواثقة بالله]

frustrated ....hopeless poem

trust Allah.....good luck aboabed

[aboabed3]

Thank you all for your kind and encouraging words

[postgraduate]

aboabed3

Thanks alot . It is really appreciated to share that with us
Sometimes we see that everything has gone .Nothing would be remained forever .Then it comes that moment which makes us feel bad or frustrated with everything around.I know that it is gonna be hard to overcome that moment ,but let us get ourselves relieved by hope and faith .Thanks alot