The Boat that won't Collapse

[postgraduate]

The Boat that won't Collapse


When sea gets rough, the wind blows fast
The endangered boat, would face a blast
Sails -on you- must, be well- fastened
To have the battle of, cyclone frightened
To Save your life, you boat should strive
For those on you, to stay a live

Sixty voyages, were full of danger
The pirates aim, to sheathe the dagger
Triumph would come, and get your visa
Towards the safety of lovely Gaza
To save your life ,you boat should strive
For those on you, to stay alive

By : Postgraduate

[رساويه]

woow
very niice feelings
thanx

[أميرة بأخلاقها@]

gorgeous

your poem touched our feelings

you have a fantastic pen

keep it up I'm waiting your precious writing

May Allah enlighten your life with faith

[كل الحنان]

WOW


MashAllah

It's so fantastic

You have great feelings..

May Allah bless you

[rose rani]

wow so great as always

very nice and honest feeling

may Allah bless u

and we pray to Allah to help our people in Gaza
thanks post

[motyri]

nice one

keep it up plz

[hajeer]

Thank you ;its wonderful

[postgraduate]

رساوية

Thanks alot ..You are welcome


أميرة بأخلاقها@

Nice to be here . Thanks for those lovely words . I know that words are not enough and could do nothing when it comes to talk about what happened and still happening to Gaza people . Palestine and Gaza in particular is our bleeding organ that has been bleeding for a long time . It is at least what we can do besides our supplications to Him the almighty to help them .Thanks again


كل الحنان

Thanks alot ... i am delighted to see you here .Thanks for that

moytri


Thanks alot for being here ..It is appreciated for you

hajeer

Thanks alot for being here and browsing . appreciated for you too

rani99

May Allah bless you and thanks for your kind passing by

[BloumagrieT]

postgraduate

Just to tell you I'm sorry I'm late

These kinds of writing can't be enjoyed or tasted by a quick passing

It's really unfair

So , brother or colleague if I may say ^^ , I'll pass by again

For the mean time , a bunch of thanks to you

[أمير المساء]

You have done a very nice feeling through a metaphoric poem ....

Thanks alot

My best prayers to our families in Gaza.May Allah help them And bless them

[postgraduate]

SoOoSoOo

Thanks alot for being here ..

[postgraduate]

أمير المساء

Thanks brother for joining us . It is appreciated for you .Nice to be here by the way

[يوسف محمد صالح]

wow
. postgraduate thanks alot

[postgraduate]

يوسف محمد صالح

Thanks so much brother for being here .. Appreciated for you