Is it Me Who Has Gone?

[postgraduate]

No place is save ,but that one . I used to run , to have fun ,but failed to catch the sun . The place I loved so much has already gone .Three of mine have not been mine anymore . The soul that used to take me there ,the eye which used to let me care and the heart whose fear was always rear .Those things of mine have gone and still the place !! though it has gone ,but there it is ! Like me ! though I am here ,but most of me have already gone . Waiting for myself ! I am still wondering . Shall I wait to catch the sun OR stay waiting for the place -I once loved -that has gone

[I care]

Your poem was so worth the read ,words cannot describe how deeply i feel for this poem


u recall ur memories and moments about that place which has gone


iam sure that place is well worth the wait


hoping u catch the sun again in it



! take care

[special miss]

WOW! A very touching poem, my dea
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It represents the feelings that we have towards our good times which we've left in the past>
I wish you the best in your present and your future, since it's a shame that we can't live the past again[/SIZE][/CENTER].

:guy face (52):

[BloumagrieT]

postgraduato << Italian accent ^^

Waiting chances and opportunities to come is the ultimate weakness my brother

cause they won't seek us

It's better to seek them

That's really a fair writing and I really have enjoyed it very much

Long time no read brother

May Allah bless that talented pen of yours

[أميرة بأخلاقها@]

postgraduate

It's really charming writing

your words force my silence to speak and I can not pass by without any comment

what can I say

I have to say thank you for this glamorous writing which touch our feelings

I accept what my lovely sister SoOoSoOo said ....we should not wait the chances we should look for them cause this is the life you should do your best to live......


accept my best regards

[postgraduate]

I care

Thanks dear for passing by . I am really happy to have you here . Thanks alot for your comment . It is appreciated for you

[postgraduate]

special miss

Thanks . You are welcome . Nice comment by the way . It is appreciated

[postgraduate]

SoOoSoOo

Thanks for your advice . It is a big honor to me seeing you over here . What can I say ? Thanks for everything you always give. Encouraging besides your nice words are appreciated for you . Thanks alot again. Thanks for passing by and for your comment too

[postgraduate]

أميرة بأخلاقها@

What is written above does not deserve all that thing . It is merely a kind of personal feeling no more no less . It is really so kind of you to say that . Your being here and passing by is something makes me happy . Thanks alot for what you have added . Appreciated for you

[عدو اليأس]

thanks my dear

[SoundOfMe]

Thank you postgraduate
what a great writing that touched my soul
I'm sure that everyone had passed
what you expessed in these deep words

Thank you again

[انجليش وبس]

postgraduate


i really admired with your fantastic sensful words

it dealight me so much

it makes me go throught it

to imagine all the pictures you add them in your words

i live the same role

really



thanks so much




take care


we 're waiting the more nice from you

[postgraduate]

عدو اليأس


You are welcome friend . Nice to have you here

[postgraduate]

Sound Of You

I am happy to hear it . Thanks alot for being here . Wish you the best of luck and success . .Thanks

[postgraduate]

انجلش وبس

Thanks alot . Thanks for passing by too . I really appreciate it for you