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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Betrayal



Na.Na
12-05-2009, 12:10 PM
Betrayal of a friend's feelings, whether intentional or not, can rip friendship apart, and leave both feeling empty. I hurt someone I care about very much, and the pain was too great for her to bear. Her friendship is like a shooting star flaring briefly across the heavens, a moment in time that I will treasure forever. Maybe, with time, the garden where our friendship grew will blossom again. Do I respect her wishes and never talk to her again, or do I try to make things right? I don’t know.


Betrayal
by Dan McDonald

An echo fades into the night,
an eerie mournful sound.
A shooting star disappears from sight,
and I crumble to the ground.
There is no life within this garden;
my sobs are the only sound.
I have poisoned the honeyed fountain
where your love could be found.

Dazed, I stare at the stars above,
my grieving howls fill the night!
Unintended betrayal of love
has hidden you from my sight.
I remember how it used to be
when we shared our fears and delights.
You are a treasured friend to me.
How can I make things right?

Feeling afraid, cold and lonely,
I long to tell you how I feel,
but you don’t want to hear me.
The pain for you is much too real.
Should I back away and build a wall
and block away how I feel?
Or, should I give you a call?
We both need some time to heal.

An echo fades into the night
as our friendship disappears.
How do I know what is right?
How can I ease my fears?
If I do call you again,
would the old wounds reappear?
I can’t stand to cause you pain.
Hurting you again is my worst fear!

الواثقة بالله
12-05-2009, 07:12 PM
nice poem
thanks NaNA

أميرة بأخلاقها@
12-05-2009, 11:07 PM
nce poem


thanks my dear

I liked your way in choosing your topics

all the best

DONT BE CRUEL
13-05-2009, 08:59 AM
frankly nice

BloumagrieT
23-05-2009, 11:34 PM
Na.Na

emmmm

I just want to say one thing

Dearest sister, if it's true , honest and real, it'll florish again in no time when

you can't the least expect it..

But

One more thing I want to add that passed my mind when I was reading your first lines

Some friends betray you from their inside in their hearts and in their minds

even if they don't show it but you can feel it<< something that I remembered

Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks Sweetie

You're the one that touches hearts and souls too

Be always blessed wherever you are

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