Lets Write A story All of Us

[M.o_o.N]

Hey Friends :D

Well , I didn't see a similar topic so I'm going to be the first :P

Its a game were we can practise our English

Each member complete the story of the other member ,short and nice . Then after ten or so replies we finish one story & start another one. .



Good?




Yala I will start :D


A beautiful girl was walking in the street going home after school , she was hungry and thought. .let me pass by the supermarket and get strawberry cake. ..

["Neverland"]

How is it a wonderful idea
:smile (81):

:

When the girl arrived, she intered the supermarket. Looked for the strawberry cake and finally she found it :smile (76):, but what happened is, when she was going to pay for it, she didn't find her wallet, It's stolen
:smile (25):

[M.o_o.N]

when she found out that she got no money she remembered that her mom's Mastercard~Visa~ was in her wallet.
Tried to reach her mobile and for her bad luck it was also stolen o_O"

["Neverland"]

At a moment she thought about die
but then she decided to tell her mother about what happened
:smile (56):
when she arrived home, she tried to write for her mom instead of tell her the truth face to face
?!..but when she opened her bag to take a paper she found that a different notebooks
it was her friend bag
:smile (55):

[M.o_o.N]

^_^
She was about to put that notebook again in the bag but she got really strange and strong feelings. .

"Uh i need to read this notebook ,i know my friend may hate me for that" she said.

["Neverland"]

ups she got excelent grades which is opposite to what she said to me
and there.. there is a picture.. he's my boyfriend..!
:smile (62):

[M.o_o.N]

the girl is pissed off now , she didn't return the notebook she just through it away.
And when her mom came back home ,the girl didn't lie & told her the trueth. .the mom said: Well sweety. .My visa with me . .and You don't take ur mobile with u to school. .
The girl smiled: Thats make a sense. .I thought I lost them. . .and what about my wallet?
Your friend just called & told me that u & her exchanged the bags. .didn't? The mother said. .

The girl replied: We did mama , we did. .

[Homie]

now the girl's so happy and she has her wallet , mobile and nothin is missing



yeaah happy ending

let's make up new one :)

cause if we go on with this one is gonna be boring


who's gonna start it

:)

["Neverland"]

Mee


There was an old man who lives a lone in a big castle. He was too rich and didn't have any heir. Now, he is sick and worrys about his fortune.

[M.o_o.N]

the old man felt so lonely & that he is dying, he needed some one to take care of him & prepare food.
He hired a young girl as a servant to clean ,cook and to help him.

[No One Else]

The servant didn't treat him well ,so he decided to fire her .. at this moment,she got angry and bushed him . he died immediately . oh my god ' she said . what hill I've did

[Lancaster]

She cried a little. Then, she pulled him and threw him into the well. She took her bag trying to escape. Unfortunately, when she opened the door,she was met by a man. He asked her about the old man. She was so upset and could not give him an answer
The man pulled his weapon and cried : " Where is the old man?

[Homie]

she didn't answer she kept silence
so the man pulled the trigger and got ready to shoot her, then someone cried WAIT don't shoot, it was the old man he didn't die , he acted like nothing happened , the girl didn't understand why the old man did that ?
why didn't he say anything ?
at the night after the another man left, the girl came to the old man
and start crying
the old man hugged her and said it's okay it's okay
i forgive you , she pulled a knife
and looked at the old man's eyes and said i'm crying because i couldn't do anything right in my life but now i'll finish the job and i'll never missed up again

[No One Else]

wise old man ^^


The nixt story is about a clever child
He is just 5 years old
but he used his intelligent to destroy others life

[Lancaster]

I think the previous story hasn't finished yet. Am I right?
She pulled a knife but what did she do with it
Did she commit suicide or kill that old man?

[MaFia]

The previous story is still unfinished.

[M.o_o.N]

lol you people r fun , i couldnt stop laughing

I can tell u like herror movies
So let me finish the story


The girl wanted to kill him she ran toward him but suddenly she fell in her face . . .the knife directly entered her body.
The oldman couldn't do anything and he was standing there like a wall. .that was God punishment , you are a criminal, the oldman said. .
In his well ,he gave all his wealth to the orphans and poor kids =)
2nd story done
CLAPS yuy ^__^

Next story: the smart 5years old kid . .
Go a head friends yalla :D

[keifee1212]

ماشاء الله تبارك الله

الكتاب كثر وفيهم مبدعين بصراحة

مع وجود بعض الأخطاء

اعتقد المستوى هنا جامعي والله أعلم

وبصراحة نفسي اصير اكتب مثلكم

استمروا :) والله يوفقكم

[knight m]

once there was a party ,there were a lot of quests.the child went to the kitchen ,he put a lot of salt in quests' dishes

[M.o_o.N]

hey brother :D
I know you can write and complete a story
Please try ^_^
Good luck

["Neverland"]

but because of his bad luck, that day was his birthday
Actually they surprised him and he forgot that
They asked him to wish something after that put out the candles then eat first

:smile (68):

["Neverland"]

keifee1212

Be sure that all of us started from the zero
so, as much you try as much you learn

[keifee1212]

keifee1212

Be sure that all of us started from the zero
so, as much you try as much you learn


it's not possible to say the zero

zero is enough without the

----

thanks for advising me

[M.o_o.N]

The kid's wish was to correct his mistake :P
When the food was served , for his luck that choco salty cake wasnt in the table. .
He asked his mom, where is dat cake ma?
She said: Uh dear ,I throw it away. .just forget it . . Its my fault I added salt instead of suger.
He kissed his mom saying I'm sorry . .

[BloumagrieT]

Renoa

That's a good idea

We've tried it once but the topic was dead

but it's ok to try again

I'll pass by again and try to add something

Thanks sister

[M.o_o.N]

hey Soso ^.^
Welcome back sister
We all missed u

[Deana]

hi I did not get the meaning of quests would u please explan it i want to share in this story
Have a nice dan..

[Deana]

sorry i think the story has endeed but i am waiting for new story

[M.o_o.N]

Hey sweety :)
It meant guest i believe. .
And Yalla u go ahead and start a story that we will share writing it. .
Thanks Deana

[Deana]

handsome young man was sitting on the banks of the beach,thinking about his life and how can he get money to pay the rent,while he thinking he......

[aussie]

how much drops in this sea
wondering, thinking, it's not fair
sea doesn't whine, it should be
it gives more, no one care
get our rubbish, that's our fee :)
dreaming long, i can share
working hard, no one dare

[M.o_o.N]

so he thought , the beach is full of dangerous stuff like sharp stones, broken glass every where and plastic unuseful trash. . .someone gotta clean it . .

He went to the nearest supermarket and brought gloves and boxes to throw the dirt inside it. .

He returnd to the beach and started cleaning it by himself.

"I am in a vacation and Cleaning my enviroment is my responsibility as a citizn" He said.

The other people felt shame that they aren't sharing him . .so they gatherd together to help him and gave him a hand in cleaning the beach.

Sorry for the spelling mistakes
I am in hurry

[Deana]

while he was gathering the rubbish with other people he remembers that he forgot to meet his close friend who will travel after one hour and his friend will travel to canada to complete his education and he will not come back before four years

[M.o_o.N]

One of the men in the beach was Taxi driver and he heard the call , He asked him if he need a ride and the man said yes.

As quick as possible the driver went directly to the airport in half an hour.

The man thanked him and when he reached the passengers hall he found his best friend was about to leave.

They met , hugd each other and wishd for the best. .


End of the story :D
Thanx Deana

[Deana]

you are welcome
I hope that everyone enjoy with this short story....

[M.o_o.N]

I hope so ^.^

So shall we start a new story?

["Neverland"]

"

SURE SISTER

"
there was a young man who lives in a big house
likes to study, travel, swim, do many activeties, and around himself with friends
who is really a good example of an optimistic man
once, he was driving his car, made an accedent
and suddenly he was in comma for 3 years
when he woke up he found no body
wondered why am I here...?!! then he tried to stand
but what happend is he lost his legs
at a moment all of his dreams broken

"

keifee1212
Thank you too :)

[M.o_o.N]

awww Neverland why you said he lost his legs? U just made me sad lol

Okay . . .let it be a romantic story since he is unable to walk :)


when he found out , he felt sad and very depressed . .he couldnt stand for the idea that he wont walk never again.

One day he was thinking and a tear fall suddenly, the nurse noticed that and she felt sad for him.
She knew that he was a good medical student so the next day she brought a book with her , knocked his room and left the book near him while he was sleeping.

["Neverland"]

renoa
for change :)

"

he saw her, but he acts as if is sleeping
after she left he looked at the book
remembered something
there was an emergency conditional
and he was on his way, driving fastly

[M.o_o.N]

it was rainy day , almost 6:00 P.M
He was driving to reach the hospital
But suddenly ,thunder stroked a tree which fall in the middle of the street ,he tried to avoid it but that lead him directly to the forst.
He couldn't move ,and he was stuck in the car.

A truck driver saw all that and went to help him. .thats all what he remembered.

["Neverland"]

he remembered how much he was love the medical
took the book,, and tried to browse it
,, he kept reading
asked the nurse to bring more and more books
and time by time he being more professional
once, he was moving by his wheelchair
heard someone who scream
No.. No .. It's impossible
at a while he stopped,, then he decided
to nack the door
and that's what really hapened
he nacked the door and asked to help
when he intered the room, the patieont's doctor asked him
why are you here..? you want something or what?.. the doctor said
he ignored the doctor and looked at the patient
told him, I heard your screams
tell my why..? may be I can help

[M.o_o.N]

the sick woman told him that she was expecting a baby and now the doctor is telling her that she is having a cancer and that is too hard to bear so she have to choose between her pregnancy or her health .
Our man is very talent and already faced such a situation, he told her that she can keep the baby and do the chemo method of therapy after her giving birth. .that might gave her only few months with her child.
The doctor was very shocked how this man know such information!
The nurse at that time was watching and she was very proud of her friend and how honest and smart doctor he is.

[aussie]

يعطيكم العافية على القصص والحيوية اللي في هذا الموضوع

ماشاء الله خيال واسع وقصص حلوة

بس فيه طلب اذا امكن

قبل ماتحطو تكمله القصص ياليت تتأكدو من الأخطاء الإملائية ( اعتقد في كل مشاركة خطأ واضح )

ما اقصد شي وانما من المحزن موضوع مثل هذا يكون مليئ بالأخطاء

وتقبلو التحية

[M.o_o.N]

Aussie

You are right
Since you bring that up why don't You start fixing the mistakes? :) and then one by one we will share you Inshaa Allah

["Neverland"]

aussie
I am very glad to know someone like you, who's able to find out our mistakes and fix them

so, we're waiting

[aussie]

امممممممم والله اني مستحي ولكن هذا طلبكم واتمنى ما احد يزعل

سأكتفي بتصحيح أول مشاركة وآخر مشاركة

بسم الله نبدأ


hey friends :d

well , i didn't see a similar topic so i'm going to be the first :p

it's a game were we can practice our english

each member complete the story of the other member ,short and nice . Then after ten or so replies we finish one story & start another one. .



good?




Yala i will start :d


a beautiful girl was walking in the street going home after school , she was hungry and thought. .let me pass by the supermarket and get strawberry cake. ..









the sick woman told him that she was expecting a baby and now the doctor is telling her that she is hasing a cancer and that is too hard to bear so she has to choose between her pregnancy or her health .
Our man is very talent and already faced such a situation, he told her that she can keep the baby and do the chemo method of therapy after giving her birth. .that might gave her only few months with her child.
The doctor was very shocked how this man know such information!
The nurse at that time was watching and she was very proud of her friend and how honest and smart doctor he was.

مع العلم اني طالب وخبرتكم احسن مني بكثير بس كذا جاني احساس انها خطأ

أطيب المنى

[M.o_o.N]

Ewww thats unfair they are only my comments loool

Thanks anyway but yalla waiting for the fixing thing ^.^

["Neverland"]

The End

"
The man learned that
however what we are in, by hard work we can create the miracles

who's the next

[aussie]

وهذا تعديل عشان Neverland


he remembered how much he was loving the medical
took the book,, and tried to browse it
,, he kept reading
asked the nurse to bring more and more books
and time by time he being more professional
once, he was moving by his wheelchair
heard someone who screamed
or
who was screaming
No.. No .. It's impossible
at a while he stopped,, then he decided
to Knock the door
and that's what really happened
he Knocked the door and asked to help
when he entered the room, the patient's doctor asked him
why are you here..? you want something or what?.. the doctor said
he ignored the doctor and looked at the patient
told him, I heard your screams
tell my why..? may be I can help

اول عدلت على I heard your screams لأني ماشفت الآر في يو واعتذر فالجملة صحيحة

مرة أخرى مستواكم أحسن مني ولكن اوقات تجيني احاسيس غريبة حول الكلمات الانجليزية

ويعجبني اتلاعب بها :)

[M.o_o.N]

Thank you both

Neverland
Aussie

for making this topic fun and refreshing it ^_^

["Neverland"]

it's my turn looooooool

aussie
I know, I have a lot of mistakes
and really I would like if there anyone who can always correct them for me
because I am sure it's the fast way to learn any language

so, join us
and let us learn from each other

[M.o_o.N]

lol okay now stop that chat and lets start a new story

a girl lost her way to her family when they were walking in the park of the city in London,,she kept walking untill she reached the main road . And decided to go to the hotel so she manged to stop a taxi and asked him to drive her to the hotel.

["Neverland"]

when she looked at her wallet
she didn't find the card of her hotel
she forgot its name
ooh my God, what should I do..she said
the taxi driver observed her condition that she was too confused and fead
he offered his service on her and she asked him to took her to the police office
she didn't know with who she sat
he was a big murderer

[M.o_o.N]

he knew that she is one rich lady from the way she wear & talk. He thought he can steal her money and just kill her.

He was a crazy killer who love to see the
blood

and to see his victim suffering, that poor girl didnt realize that and just wanted to find her family and go to the police station.

["Neverland"]

she saw the police office at the corner
and felt happy..
now I can meet my family.. she said
she was smile till she observed that
the driver left that office behind him..!
at first, she told him,,the office is there
so, you have to return
,but the man ignored her and continued his way
hello, are you deaf.. she said
also, there is no answer
she saw his foxy smile
asked him to stop immediately or she will scream ,, but he didn't
and now she knew that she is in trouble

[M.o_o.N]

She was thinking to jump off the taxi but she was so afraid to hurt herself. .
So the best move have to be when he stop for the traffic light.
When he did she took her perfume bottle and broke his head with it ,and gave him three hits with her heels .
He was screeming from the pain and freezed so she opened the door and ran away till she entered a coffeshop and phoned 911.

End of the story or you wanna add something Neverland?

["Neverland"]

No Addition sister
how it was an awful day
^^

the new story

"
There was a poor widow woman who has 7 children
and lives in a little home
worked in a market under an evil man
who knew how much she need money

[M.o_o.N]

good for us
We should start thinking of publishing our own book lol
What do you think?

he was wicked man he wanted her farm in any possible way ,she refused because that farm was all what she own. And that farm is their house so she can never put it for sale.

["Neverland"]

looooooooooooool

I'm thinking seriously about that



In the middle of the month her salary finished.
She thought to offer her farm for sale
while she was looking for "Instrument farm ownership" she found that her husband owns a shopping mall !!
She screamed couldn't believe it and thought it was dream !!


Finally, happy ending ^^

[مدردش]

Your story reminded me of those Mexican Balmlesslat
Where the endless

I have no involvement
Read only
Thanks

[M.o_o.N]

nah I didn't like that
She should suffer more lol
I mean she may think later to sell it but for her luck the lottery paper she bought matched the winning numbers and that mean she won 1000,000 dollars from the lottery show.

She renew her house, pay her bills and opened her own grocery business.

That is more =alive= story
What do you think Neverland?

مدردش
Hey I didn't get what u meant
But i think u didnt like our stories lol

You better share us with ur comments & stories than just READING :P

["Neverland"]

I think my ending is much better
loooooooooooool

so, let's start one completely new story
;)

[M.o_o.N]

No way mine is cooler lol

Okay new story

A muslim man wanted to marry a christian girl he met at university but his parents refused that.

["Neverland"]

back

"

the first meeting was in a family's home, whom he lived with
she was them friend,, visits them usually
he saw her once, twice, and more
fall in love with her
at first, his goal was study and no thing else
but then everything changed

what was really hard is, when he remembered his cousin (Fiancee )
who's trust him and waiting him to complete his education, comeback then get married

[M.o_o.N]

welcome back ^_^




so he was really sad what to do

shall he follow his heart and marry the Christian girl

or follow the reason and marry his cousin!!!

that was difficult decision to make

he went to the near by masjed and prayed Estikharah
when he went home he slept and had a dream that told him what to do

[Lancaster]

In his dream, he saw a big black snake creeping around him in a suspicious way. As the snake tried to get close to him, it was driven away by an old man.So, the man woke up and went to ...........

["Neverland"]

in his dream he saw himself walked alone in middle of street
the weather was dark, cold, and scary
Suddenly , he arrived at two ways and has to choose one
he was doubtful and unsure, which one is more safe..!?

when he being so nearby from them
he heard strange voice
which laugh once and cry in another

[M.o_o.N]

after those two dreams lol

He woke up in tears
And then he prayed

He was thinking what that dreams meant so in the morning he went to the Shaikh and told him about what he went through.

The Shaikh adviced him to listen to his parents and Allah will gauid him to the right path

["Neverland"]

looool
he took their parents advice seriously
and asked Allah for help him to forget that girl

once he was walked on street
then
he saw his girl with another gulf boy
ooops it's unbelievable.. he said

then he knew that, his parents was right
so, now he done his education
came back to his country
get married from his cousin
and thanked Allah for guide him to the correct way

[M.o_o.N]

great happy ending ^__^

thanks Neverland bless you

yall whos next??

["Neverland"]

It's me
^^


The new story is about a talent boy who has a beautiful voice and depressed people around him

[M.o_o.N]

welcome my partner :D

that boy got magical voice ,people around him always ask him to sing and when he do they start crying .
His voice is mixed with a sad tone and that what he hate most about himself.

[Deana]

This boy always wake up at the midnight and intonation the Quran with a devout voice then their parents waked up trying to hear that wonderful voice.They think the voice come from the neighbors house

["Neverland"]

hiiii buddies

one day, he woke up with out voice
tried hard to talk and scream
but with no useful

[M.o_o.N]

that was a disaster because tommorow is the day for his school play in the stage and he is the hero.

His parents took him to the hospital and the doctor told them that every thing is all right and he can't see any physical problem!

The boy wrote to his mom that yesterday when he was in the stage practicing his mate said u got great voice i wish i can have it ,and that was an evil eye == lol

So the next day the boy asked his friend to say Masha Allah.
When he did ,his voice came back.
It was miracle but subhan Allah happend :D


good ending?

["Neverland"]

yes
^^
but I have a quastion
how he told him to say masha Allah
looool

:

the next story
??

[M.o_o.N]

lol I really don't know
Okay next story


its a story about a young man who love to surf the internet and chat with other people to know new languages and cultures.

["Neverland"]

which is the reason of faired him from his school
he spent a lot of time on the internet
slept late
his mom adviced him many times to organize his life but he didn't
so, she thought of a punishment

[M.o_o.N]

she thought of taking his computer but then she had a good idea.

She sent her son to the village were his grandparents live there. That must give him a good lesson

[Lancaster]

In his way there, he bought a mobily connect in order not to miss his friends.So, when he met his grandparents, he found out that they were very fond of the internet since they did not have any. They gathered around him asking him to show them the plastic surgery in the youtube. Because his grandma wanted to get rid of the wrinkles and play football with kids. And his grandpa wanted to take an address of a Russian girl so as to marry her. The boy thought a little and .....................

[M.o_o.N]

lol
the boy couldnt believe what his grandpa and grandma are saying

He said what the hell u r oldies talking about!?! O_o

They laughed and said it was a joke :)

[Lancaster]

When the boy fell asleep, his grandma took his laptop and gave it to her mice. "Hide it in the forest, please" said the grandma. She brought a plastic tyre and lit a fire. "Oh, little boy. Wake up. look at your laptop" cried the grandma. The boy woke up and spilled water on the fire. Unfortunately, He could not save anything. Then, he checked the fire place and found a black plastic molten stuff. He cried a little:guy face (68): and phoned his parents. ............................................

[M.o_o.N]

he was beging and just want to leave the village ,but his mom told him that they are very busy and can't be there but in the weekend.

The boy couldnt bear it and went to down the town to take a walk.

While he was walking he passed by beautiful farms and very nice places ,he even forgot that he is sad because of that laptop .

[Lancaster]

As he was there, He saw a butterfly. He followed the butterfly trying to catch it. After that, he heard something that was familiar to him.

[M.o_o.N]

it was sound of water

He walked untill he reached a wonderful lake and there he found a young boy fishing.

[Lancaster]

"Morning"
said the boy. The young boy did not reply. "Why are you sitting alone" said the boy. He received no reply. Then, he came close to him . When he reached the young boy, he was tremble. The boy has no face. .So, the boy ran as much as he could. As he was running, he fell in a trap and became unconscious

[M.o_o.N]

when he woke up he found himself at his grandma house ,he has fever & his mother next to his bed taking care of him.

He said what happend , a voice came from the step of the door and the same boy appeared.

You fell and I carried you here, the boy said.

Thanks . . .the mother replied and then she turnd to her son and said: Look this boy is my nephew his name is Jamal ,his parents died in a car accident ,his face wasnt like that but he had sergery that day. .he was in the car too.

[Lancaster]

Lol
What I mean is that the boy is a sprite. According to our maid , She said that she saw a lady with long hair and when she turned she had no face. Only hair with an empty face.

?Have you got it.

Anyway, I'll complete the stoy later .And now I have to go to make our Suhur
Bye^_^

[M.o_o.N]

I heard about that also but I didnt want to write a scary story lol

Okay huny
Take care

[Lancaster]

Then, Jamal disappeared and his ma and grandma, too. So, the boy recovered his conscious. He was only alone in a dark scary cave. . . He felt that his clothes are wet. He was barely able to stand. Then, he tried to walk but he fell again. He was so tired. "Heeeelp. Heeeeelp". He cried. Then, he heard a scary laugh and a scream. So

..........................................





Whenever you try to kill the supernatural element in the story, I will say: "IT WAS JUST A DREAM" LOL
:guy face (67):

[M.o_o.N]

lol
Thats mean our hero was dreaming all the time

He learnt to obay his mother and just become a good student again :)

[Lancaster]

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No Comment
I'm out.

[M.o_o.N]

O_o
Okay miss

Next member start new story

[h7100]

Hello everyone,
___________________________


"No one knows"
It was very hot place to live, but he didn't care about the weather. He just wanted to save the beautiful life he had. When he was out, which house where he lived the loudly voice was happened.
"My husband our house is burning right now! Hurry …"
his wife said

[eastrenrose]

there is a boy who live with his father he has no friends .he spent alot of time on his computer.even he didnot talk to his father.his father is always busy at work .they just met at breakfast meal .the internet was his world.