مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : I am not no more me
habeeb
12-11-2009, 01:11 AM
I am not no more me
I look , but I used to see
I hear, but now the two looks and sound three
I talk but no fruits on this tree
I fight but my fight is now for others to see
I help but my help is rarely free
I teach but now a must is the fee
I am no more me
living while dying
selling and buying
telling the truth yet lying
sadly most will die trying
I am no more me
there used to be a kid in me
MisS shy
12-11-2009, 02:38 PM
thanks a lot brother"habeeb" 4 sharing us
cute dream
12-11-2009, 05:45 PM
wooow ,, amazing job
i loved the last line most
it shows the way u er inspired ,, it shows alot about u
nice writing ...
keep doing so ,,,
M.o_o.N
15-11-2009, 02:16 AM
Masha Allah if this poem is by you
Then I should tell you how much I admire your style and the way you put the words.
Next time I wanna read shiny and happy poem :)
Thanx alot
book-n-coffee
15-11-2009, 05:55 PM
I am not no more me
I look , but I used to see
I hear, but now the two looks and sound three
I talk but no fruits on this tree
I fight but my fight is now for others to see
I help but my help is rarely free
I teach but now a must is the fee
I am no more me
living while dying
selling and buying
telling the truth yet lying
sadly most will die trying
I am no more me
there used to be a kid in me
lost in this world-- what a great thought brother Habeeb
If I may, I'd like to find out who wrote these lines?? was it you-- well anyways I wanted to say I really enjoyed reading your lines
thanks again :)
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