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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : something I wrote~To Be alive



T H U N D E R
28-11-2009, 01:48 AM
To Be alive










To live your life, to enjoy your life you have to fight for it.

first of all


you have to believe that you are still alive.!
someone will ask how is that?
it's simple, when you fight to increase your ability's
in life you are still alive.
When you make your own decision's your still alive.
So don't care about what the people think about you
they don’t have the right to governing our life's.
It's hard to see the light in the bright day, every one can
find light in the dark but to find it in the day you must have
an eye that can differentiate between the real light
and the fake one.
Our world now day's become a bloody war, the clean soul
will get murdered by those who kill there soul's and become
an evil soul in a human body
and they maybe our close friends.



Second


our heart's get sick and

with many thing's such as lying, Deception, Fear
Of the future. you have to show the real Meaning of your Relationship because some of the sick heart's will think about the thing you do .
It's not just a feeling it's a fact that we are facing it
in our life .I now it's so hard to heal a sick heart simply
because the human heart is a pump if we full it with love,
truth , bright view. These thing's if the heart pump it all over our body's our life will become a very nice garden
and if it pumped those bad things that hurt our heart's our life will
become a bloody hell .It's just a game with very an expensive price .


finally

if we just keep walking in the dark and hope to find the burnt candle we will not find it ever but when we make sure that we will find it we will find it then we can wake up from our nightmare
that we create, too bad to let our life and our world die like this. open your window get use to see the sun delete the dark night destroy your past start a new life look at the sty you will
see the birds are challenging the cloud's ,you will see the
a young girl try to catch a butterfly she knows that maybe it impossible
to catch it but she will keep trying . if you put in mind that you will get everything in the first
step make sure that you will get nothing.

ريما الحسين
28-11-2009, 01:55 AM
wow wow mashallah you are amazing my brother

I'm proud of u

thx alot dear and go ahead

فـيصـل
28-11-2009, 02:18 AM
wow
your words are absolutely amazing and fabulous

just keep on my bro....i'm seeing the the real talent now


thanks you

T H U N D E R
28-11-2009, 02:20 AM
wow wow mashallah you are amazing my brother

I'm proud of u

thx alot dear and go ahead



the only amazing thing is ur passing here

thx alot

T H U N D E R
28-11-2009, 02:23 AM
wow
your words are absolutely amazing and fabulous

just keep on my bro....i'm seeing the the real talent now


thanks you


thx 4 the nice pass Faisal


by the way

my best wishs 4 you'r mother

M.o_o.N
28-11-2009, 08:30 AM
T H U N D E R


Hey there ^_^

Welcome to our club

ummmmmmm

You are talented and skillful

your writing is very clear and well written masha Allah

I admire it

and you are completely right


to enjoy your life you have to fight for it

Keep it up

waiting to read more

Allah may bless you

^^

postgraduate
28-11-2009, 11:25 PM
THUNDER

Great job friend . Thanks for sharing

علاء
28-11-2009, 11:34 PM
v nice
i like it
my regard bro

الشامخ 9
28-11-2009, 11:35 PM
U R amazing my brother

I'm proud of u

thx alot dear

rose rani
28-11-2009, 11:40 PM
wow T H U N D E R

your wrinting is just like
your nickname

great job

keep up the good work

and keep up enjoying us

by your wonderful writing

فاتح القدس
29-11-2009, 01:55 AM
go ahead dear

i want u to continue your writing

Petunia
29-11-2009, 02:44 AM
brother T H U N D E R

really mashallah great talent i agree with your writing opinion

that's our reality we can't ignore it sometimes we being affected

by people and if we don't have own personality,we would be under their control

................



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Petunia
29-11-2009, 02:45 AM
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really like your writing .go ahead brother

may Allah bless you

T H U N D E R
29-11-2009, 03:57 AM
T H U N D E R


Hey there ^_^

Welcome to our club

ummmmmmm

You are talented and skillful

your writing is very clear and well written masha Allah

I admire it

and you are completely right



Keep it up

waiting to read more

Allah may bless you

^^



Im glad that u like it

thanx 4 ur lovely passing

T H U N D E R
29-11-2009, 03:59 AM
THUNDER

Great job friend . Thanks for sharing



no broplem


im just doing my job:smile (92):

T H U N D E R
29-11-2009, 04:00 AM
v nice
i like it
my regard bro




any time bro


thanx 4 passing

حديقة الجوري
29-11-2009, 04:38 PM
Thunder

i'm very proud of you

but be careful of the spelling and the grammar too

but in general you are amazing

:lost lady:
30-11-2009, 02:54 AM
Hey there
Masha Allah
That's fabulous bro

this is what do we really need to do in order to live and enjoy our life
You're very very talented
May Allah keep U like that

T H U N D E R
01-12-2009, 02:15 AM
Thunder

i'm very proud of you

but be careful of the spelling and the grammar too

but in general you are amazing



im glad that u like it


ill but that in mind

thanks 4 every thing

T H U N D E R
01-12-2009, 02:17 AM
Hey there
Masha Allah
That's fabulous bro

this is what do we really need to do in order to live and enjoy our life
You're very very talented
May Allah keep U like that


:smile (87):


thanks 4 the nice words

it helps a lot

thanks againe

G L O R Y
01-12-2009, 05:00 AM
Our Dear Brother T H U N D E R

Masha' Allah

What A Great Talent that We have Here

God Bless U

Well Done .. Keep On Bro.

Very Glad To Be Here

God Be With You all Times

T H U N D E R
01-12-2009, 08:38 AM
Our Dear Brother T H U N D E R

Masha' Allah

What A Great Talent that We have Here

God Bless U

Well Done .. Keep On Bro.

Very Glad To Be Here

God Be With You all Times




oh that's so sweet thanks


god bless u 2

fragile gal
02-12-2009, 04:07 PM
wow i was moved y every word
man! you're good

thanx

BloumagrieT
02-12-2009, 11:31 PM
T H U N D E R

You've done a good job

Keep up the goos work and we'll keep on reading

I've enjoyed it