مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : ~*~My Soul~*~
الغاليه
30-11-2005, 12:26 AM
This is a poem that I wrote… not very good but I hope u like it
My soul behold…can I take you to the moon
To create a new season of love and glamour
I'll reach the sun and bring it down
To make your days forever shine
The velvet touch of your hand
Turns my world into a dance
There is no one around me
When you are close to me
I look into your eyes…I see a light
That takes my heart in a joyful ride
Roses blossom in my dreams
'cause you live inside of me
I love you deeply…I love you so
I wish you know that before I go
And my voice is heard no more
Abo Lama
30-11-2005, 01:05 AM
الغالية
I'll reach the sun and bring it down
To make your days forever shine
our star shines wherever we go
keep it on my sister plz
الغاليه
30-11-2005, 01:14 AM
dear brother
am so honoured that u were the first 2 read my humble words
thanx a lot 4 ur sweet complements
الهمة العالية
30-11-2005, 02:42 AM
you are realy wonderful
you are amazing
go ahead show us
how high are you darling
الغاليه
01-12-2005, 08:59 PM
I can't thank you enough for your kind words
they mean a lot 2 me
am so pleased my dear sweet friend
sokara
02-12-2005, 11:53 AM
الغاليه
htanx for sharing us
your nicehttp://www.w6w.net/album/30/thumbs/w6w20050411134107651e12869.gif word
الغاليه
02-12-2005, 01:08 PM
thank you for your sweet comment
God bless you
DR AHLAIN
02-12-2005, 06:11 PM
I love you deeply…I love you so
I wish you know that before I go
And my voice is heard no more
Fantastic...Fantastic....
Al-Ghaliah
Very nice thing to have such writers as You
Everyday you suprise us with wonderful works
I discovered that you are sensitive in addition to your sense of humor
YOU ENCOURAGE US TO WAIT YOUR NEXT WORK
SO PLEASE HURRY UP...WE ARE WAITIG
الغاليه
02-12-2005, 06:50 PM
sooooo big words dear DR;AHLAIN
I feel embarrassed while reading your sweet encouragement
I hope I don't dissappoint you
thanx soooooooooooooo much
فاتح القدس
03-12-2005, 08:10 PM
That's
brilliant
&
right on the button
الغاليه
03-12-2005, 08:29 PM
I'm speachless
Fateh Al-Qouds...to see your comment is a pleasure for me
thanx soooo much for it
اسيــ حبه ــرة
04-12-2005, 04:27 PM
that's wounderful
Really nice to see you here
So lovely words .. Thanks alot
Don't deprive us from your presence
Thanks aloooooooot .. Keep posting such as this
الغاليه
04-12-2005, 05:43 PM
so pleased that u liked it
I hope I don't dissappoint u
thanx 4 ur wonderful words
Instigator
04-12-2005, 06:02 PM
,Dear Alghalyah
your words make me feel alive
.to survive and to touch the sky
.Thanks a lot for sharing it with us
.Keep it up
الغاليه
04-12-2005, 10:45 PM
welcome back dear brother
don't you ever leave us :D
thanx 4 your kind words
JuSt Me
06-12-2005, 01:29 PM
WoW!
well-spoken words sis,
keep on in this mood,
you are an awesome poet.
It is rocking, even walls will broke.
الغاليه
06-12-2005, 06:38 PM
oh my God!!...I can't believe that u liked it that much
your words mean a lot 2 me
thanks Just Me 4 your sweet comment
although I don't think I deserve it :D
Userper
06-12-2005, 11:51 PM
I have noticed the shape of the
of the text which wellknown
poets do to make a relation
between the meaning and the
form which is called framal style.
You said :
I wish you know that before I go
And my voice is heard no more
but you didn't tell what you want us to know.
الغاليه
07-12-2005, 12:20 AM
I love you deeply…I love you so
I wish you know that before I go
And my voice is heard no more
it's obvious...
what I want him 2 know is that I love him
thanx a lot 4 commenting
JuSt Me
07-12-2005, 03:40 AM
Why not deserve Al-Ghaliah?
It has a sweet taste. :rolleyes:
الغاليه
07-12-2005, 02:36 PM
Why not deserve Al-Ghaliah?
It has a sweet taste. :rolleyes:
thanx a million time 4 ur encouragement
God bless u
SuPeRLaRk
07-12-2005, 04:00 PM
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I'll reach the sun and bring it down
To make your days forever shine
REALY IT VERY NICE POEM
PLS KEEP ON & SHARE US WITH UR NICE POEM[/center]
الغاليه
07-12-2005, 09:06 PM
glad u liked it
thank u 4 passing and 4 ur sweet complemint
زهرة وفى
09-12-2005, 01:22 AM
thanks my sister
you are great
and
incredible
May Allah bless you
keep on
الغاليه
09-12-2005, 03:34 PM
YOU are the GREAT dear
am sooo pleased that u passed and read it
and more pleased that u liked it
thank u sooo much
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