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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Iam not a toy in your hand



eastrenrose
18-01-2010, 01:24 AM
Iam not a toy in your hand

Playing with hearts,
As playing with fire
There s always someone
Who burns a hand
But who will be your victim?
who will be your victim
This time, this time and the last

If there s a last I would be the one
No. more toys. No more
broken hearts to thousand of pieces
who will solve your puzzle this time

Iam not a toy in your hand
iam the one who chose to be there,
there in your heart for ever and alone

Oh, dear I have closed many doors
just to keep you mine
I fail, I fail, to hold you a long
You free to go to the toys land
but I know I will be always you favorite one

written by eastrenrose

i will be galde if you read it and give me your opion a bout , it s just a try

دمعات حزينة
18-01-2010, 06:25 PM
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M.o_o.N
18-01-2010, 07:40 PM
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masha Allah




eastrenrose




good poem dear sister




Iam not a toy in your hand
iam the one who chose to be there




i like those two lines

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thanks sweety for sharing us

well done and I hope to read more of your creativity

الشامخ 9
18-01-2010, 07:47 PM
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N teacher
18-01-2010, 07:53 PM
a great poem

dear sister

i love it

Allah protect u

فوتي
18-01-2010, 08:41 PM
that's greet subject

thank you

+الرومانسية+
18-01-2010, 09:12 PM
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eastrenrose
18-01-2010, 09:16 PM
thanks all for your support and advice .that s very nice of you

Nanosh
21-01-2010, 01:41 AM
Go Ahead
it's perfect

Petunia
21-01-2010, 02:41 AM
nice words

thanks

really liked it
:)

Petunia
21-01-2010, 02:41 AM
nice words

thanks

really liked it
:)

ACME
21-01-2010, 01:25 PM
Go Ahead Easternrose
Full of Sentiments

BloumagrieT
21-01-2010, 04:59 PM
eastrenrose

Well done

That's a good beginning

Keep it up and one day you'll master it

Thanks I really enjoyed it

rose rani
21-01-2010, 06:54 PM
so nice poem

thank you fro sharing us