Where are you..... A poem by Sirhasan

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Where are you

Where are you my darling , my only love

Of this hard life I had enough

I searched for you far and near

But find nothing , except my tear

In vain did I look everywhere

In every spot I began to stare

I looked at the sky and saw your face

Smiling to me as always the case

I looked at the waves of the silent sea

And saw you again , looking at me

Your baby face and shining eyes

Captivated me and strongly ties

I feel you in the air passing by

But can't touch you however I try

Wherever I go , I find you there

Around me and every where

My baby , heart is torn apart

My life stopped , I need to start

I heard your voice calling me

Come on my soul mate , make me be






Sirhasan

[البـارع]

what a nice poem
full of emotions and deep feelings

also, it rhymed well
keep it up

[BloumagrieT]

sirhasan

It's wonderful

Thank you brother

Keep reading and practicing

and we'll see a poet of good taste among us here

Have a nice day

[دمعات حزينة]

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[light the moon]

what great pome
I like it
thanks alot
really it is nice

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Thanks to allllllllllllllllll
for their approval and praise
and encouragement
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[aussie]

in vain i did look everywhere

smiling to me as alyaws be the case

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Dear aussie

In the first sentence , the inversion is done to give more emphasis

that I looked really every where

In the second sentence , if I add be , it will be a broken rhyme

Thanks for your comment

[cute dream]

i enjoyed reading every single line there ,,

u er really bushing me ,, to show my words which i love making them hidden

u got this prolific imagination

keep it up :)

[Nanosh]

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[أنــفاس عــمان]

I liked your way in picturing it all

you have a wonderful ability to write about your feelings

in a warm and so deep way

keep the wonderful job up and up and up

:)

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I liked your way in picturing it all

you have a wonderful ability to write about your feelings

in a warm and so deep way

keep the wonderful job up and up and up

:)







Dear , Your words are so delicate like


a nice


cool


breeze

:small (247):

Thanks indeed

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What about the other members

How do you find it

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[فاتح القدس]

great

very great

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wonderful

words ,

poem ,

and

poet

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we are waiting for more poems from you

[S..S]

searched for you far and near

But find nothing , except my tear

:smile (6):

Your baby face and shining eyes

Captivated me and strongly ties

I feel you in the air passing by

But can't touch you however I try

Wherever I go , I find you there

Around me and every where

My baby , heart is torn apart

My life stopped , I need to start
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so sweet meanings and poetical poem

Beautiful lines and Wonderful Poet

I enjoy reading it

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Thank u so so so much

May Allah Bless Your Heart

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[eastrenrose]

I enjoyed reading it.it s very emotional poem
We are waiting new poems

[M.o_o.N]

Masha Allah , nice and romance

The images are soft and I could imagin that beloved one while reading your well written poem.

The sounds , the clear words , the whole rhym ,the air and the pass ... They all made a strong full of love poem.

I enjoyed reading your own greatness and creativity brother Sirhasan . Now I know some of your character Mr.skillful ^_^ I will be waiting for another poem by you :)

Allah may bless your life.

[The Soul Of hope]

u r a great poet

it is so nice

although they r simple words ,but having great wonderful meaning

thanx alot

[مهـرة الـروح]

masha'allah

creative poet

it's great

go on

with my best wishes

MAY ALLAH PROTECT U

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Masha Allah , nice and romance

The images are soft and I could imagin that beloved one while reading your well written poem.

The sounds , the clear words , the whole rhym ,the air and the pass ... They all made a strong full of love poem.

I enjoyed reading your own greatness and creativity brother Sirhasan . Now I know some of your character Mr.skillful ^_^ I will be waiting for another poem by you :)

Allah may bless your life.



How lucky I am to receive such a great
support from a great and a smart person
a prominent and remarkable character
From my heart I say thank you my friend
Because your opinion is very important to me
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[Lancaster]

Masha' Allah

What a nice poem!
:)

[postgraduate]

Sir Hasan

Thanks for those lovely lines .They are as pretty as that person who wrote them . Thanks alot

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Sir Hasan

Thanks for those lovely lines .They are as pretty as that person who wrote them . Thanks alot




Thanks to you dear fo your lovely remark and support

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u r a great poet

it is so nice

although they r simple words ,but having great wonderful meaning

thanx alot



Thanks So Much For Your Nice Comment And Support

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great

very great

=========
wonderful

words ,

poem ,

and

poet

======

we are waiting for more poems from you




Thanks Bro For Your Reaction , I Admire It

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masha'allah

creative poet

it's great

go on

with my best wishes

MAY ALLAH PROTECT U



Thanks A Bundle Muhrah For Your Delicate Words
May Allah Protect You 2

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[غُـربــ وطن ـة]

Great wonderful peom

I like so much

God may bless you

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Great wonderful peom

I like so much

God may bless you



My thanks to U , I am happy U liked it

[جوهر]

what a wonderful poem i think that u r a great poet
may allah help you:smile (40)::smile (40)::smile (40):

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what a wonderful poem i think that u r a great poet
may allah help you:smile (40)::smile (40)::smile (40):



Thanks so much for your lovely words

I appreciate them indeed

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[أميرة بأخلاقها@]

my big brother sirhasan

frankly great writing

if you keep on this way and work hard on your gift you will become great poet in the future

wish you happiness and prosperity

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my big brother sirhasan

frankly great writing

if you keep on this way and work hard on your gift you will become great poet in the future

wish you happiness and prosperity




Thanks for your delicate words , nice to see you here

I appreciate your passing and comment

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I hope other will like it , too

[dolphy]

nice really nice
i always want to read simple
english pome and
i found it
thanx alot
great work keep it up

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nice really nice
i always want to read simple
english pome and
i found it
thanx alot
great work keep it up


My great thanks for your nice passing and comment

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Masha' Allah

What a nice poem!
:)



I am happy you liked it . Thanks a lot

[إجتماعي]

Yaaaarb .. I don’t know what I have to say I red it 4 times ..cause it’s so wonderful poem
Thanks a lot for sharing.. May Allah bless you sirhassan
Waiting more & more from your golden fingers

[rose rani]

wonderful poem
full of emotions
thank you sir for sharing us

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

sirhasan
I did not know that you write poems
I really like it
We Miss You Sir

[Miss-Thought]

sirhasan, I like your beautiful poem, the words are very deep and reflective, the scene, the mood, and the image is very nice. Keep on writing. You have a great talent

[hot-meme=girl]

Wallahy SoOoOoOooO Wounderfull

an' in fact, it's full of tears

May Allah bless an' protect u bro