When you come , When you go -

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When you come , When you go

:smile (101)::smile (101)::smile (101):

When you come
I change a lot
My poor heart
beat so fast
I do not know
how to act
I do not know
what to say
My happy times
travel fast
and I hope not


We sit together
and do not say even a word
We let our
eyes to communicate
And sentiments
to operate
We spend a day
and do not even feel so bored



When you go
my whole life
turned grey
I want to go
I do not stay
I do not know
I walk away
With just only
memories
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of that day

[ريما الحسين]

wow cool poem , You are an amazing poet

thx alot

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Reema

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[Nanosh]

Go Ahead
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[:lost lady:]

Creative as always
Sirhasan , you are amazing
keep it up please

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Creative as always
Sirhasan , you are amazing
keep it up please


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[muhamedr]

You'er incredible
a true poet
:smile (40)::smile (40):

[eastrenrose]

Thanks for this poem
I wish to u the best and waiting for the next

[أنــفاس عــمان]

I walk away

With just only

memories

of that day







Amazing

absolutely fantastic

pleasing writing but it contain sad & mixed with strong feeling

Keep it up

:)

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Many thanks to all for their encouraging comments

[aussie]

dear Hasan

beats so fast

it is agood poem

Kind Regards

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Thanks To All For Their Remarks And Passing Nicely

[Petunia]

really weally soooo nice words Masha'allah

that's great bro

i liked it too much

thanks for sharing it with us

[M.o_o.N]

dont you miss those days?

I can feel something between the lines , the writer is a sensitive person , I dont blame you. Who lived and experienced all that should miss them one day.

No one can feel what you wrote but you . I wouldnt hold my tears if I were you and each night memories will take me away .

Thank you brother Mr. Poet , I hope you are feeling better now :)

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dont you miss those days?

I can feel something between the lines , the writer is a sensitive person , I dont blame you. Who lived and experienced all that should miss them one day.

No one can feel what you wrote but you . I wouldnt hold my tears if I were you and each night memories will take me away .

Thank you brother Mr. Poet , I hope you are feeling better now :)


Dear U r true in every word u said , but life comes with no guarantees
It is so changeable . Unfortunatly , happy times travel fast
I greatly appreciate ur generous passing and lovely comments
May Allah bless ur heart

.

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I hope others like it , too

[dolphy]

We sit together
and do not say even a word
We let our
eyes to communicate
And sentiments
to operate
We spend a day
and do not even feel so bored




:smile (75):


that time when we comunicate by our eyes
do u know how far we go
how love and happy we r
so dont leave me that time
maybe it once in a life

what would i say
ma-r-v-e-ls
really thank u
and keep going

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We sit together
and do not say even a word
We let our
eyes to communicate
And sentiments
to operate
We spend a day
and do not even feel so bored




:smile (75):


that time when we comunicate by our eyes
do u know how far we go
how love and happy we r
so dont leave me that time
maybe it once in a life

what would i say
ma-r-v-e-ls
really thank u
and keep going


I am happy you liked it . Thanks for your nice passing

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really weally soooo nice words Masha'allah

that's great bro

i liked it too much

thanks for sharing it with us


I appreciate your coming by . Thanks a lot

[ツأميمة الأحمديツ]

my words is Bowing for your golden letters

...
،
...


SIR

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my words is Bowing for your golden letters

تنحني محابري إجلالا واحتراما لــ سمو حرفك . ....
وشكراً لرقيك الذي عطر المكان ،،
دمت ودامت لنا روعتك . ...

من ذا الذي يجرأ ان يمر دون ان اقف اجلالا لروعتك
SIR


When I read your words , I felt a strange feeling . A mixture of shyness and pride and
happiness . Every word you wrote will make an echo . May Allah protect you . Big thanks.

[آنسهOoفكره]

when i read your poem i remeber this quotition

“Always remember to slow down in life; live, breathe, and learn; take a look around you
whenever you have time and never forget everything and every person that has the least place within your heart.”


lovely poem ..so sensetive feelings

if i onley can express my feelings like you...

God bless you,,you fluent poet :smile (101):

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when i read your poem i remeber this quotition

“Always remember to slow down in life; live, breathe, and learn; take a look around you
whenever you have time and never forget everything and every person that has the least place within your heart.”


lovely poem ..so sensetive feelings

if i onley can express my feelings like you...

God bless you,,you fluent poet :smile (101):


I am happy to read your post . You are a sensetive and prolific writer

Thanks so much for your coming by . You are always appreciated.

[الواثقة بالله]

Amazing!, i love it!.

:)

[mooleymoon]

i love it

^^ keep on ^^