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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Yes or No



ACME
29-01-2010, 08:33 PM
What do you have in mind ?

Why do you keep it inside ?

Your love words are unsaid

It's only me who did

My dear , make it clear

I want to stop my fear

Are you meant to be with me ?

The dream I always see

Are your emotions true

I really want to know

Do I have a place in your heart ?

Or shall we , one day part

Are we , as you said , one

Or we are rather two

Just let me know or let me go

You said yes and said no

You did yes and did no

You let my worries grow

I know nothing my dear

I only shed my tear

Be frank with me , love

Tell me yes or tell me no

I want to Know

I want to Know

By
Sirhasan

muhamedr
29-01-2010, 09:17 PM
Yes
you're going to be one, rather than two
one day
thnx

ACME
29-01-2010, 11:41 PM
Dear muhamedr

You are a amart guy indeed

:smile (71):

Thanks so much for your positive answer

I really appreciate your comment

أنــفاس عــمان
29-01-2010, 11:51 PM
Sooooo emotional

and touchy

Your words are very nice

Keep it up

:)

S..S
29-01-2010, 11:52 PM
What do you have in mind ?

Why do you keep it inside

Do I have a place in your heart ?

Or shall we , one day part

Just let me know or let me go

You said yes and said no

You let my worries grow

I know nothing my dear

I only shed my tear

Tell me yes or tell me no

I want to Know

I want to Know

By
Sirhasan

:smile (40):


Thanks

:smile (101)::smile (101):

:smile (101):

May Allah Blesssssssssssssss Your Heart

ACME
30-01-2010, 12:12 AM
Anfas Oman - S..S
Thanks so much
for your nice
delicate
inspirational
comments
:smile (40):

:lost lady:
30-01-2010, 03:41 AM
OMG
I really want to know
Do I have a place in your heart ?
Or shall we , one day part
Are we , as you said , one
Or we are rather two
Just let me know or let me go
very touching words
yeah, just let me know or let me go
Masha' Allah
Sirhasan
what a remarkable and magnificent poem
keep it up please

ACME
30-01-2010, 08:25 AM
Dear lost lady
Your remarks are always inspiring
Thank you for the great stock of nice
and encouraging words that you have

postgraduate
30-01-2010, 12:10 PM
sirhasan

Emotional lines indeed ! Thanks brother .

zozo
01-02-2010, 04:50 PM
that's cool sirhassan

Keep up the good effort - your a great writer

rose rani
01-02-2010, 05:28 PM
you are realy gifted

I have enjoyed reading it
keep up the good work

ACME
01-02-2010, 08:52 PM
Thanks to all for their encouragement and support

**PRINCESS**
01-02-2010, 09:39 PM
:smile (40):

sir hassan i really liked your touchy emotional poem

i love it

keep up the good work


waiting for more

DR AHLAIN
01-02-2010, 11:16 PM
That is touching..YES it is



sirhasan


Thanks for shring us ...waiting for more

:)

الكفراوي
07-02-2010, 08:54 PM
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الكفراوي
07-02-2010, 08:57 PM
:small (372)::marsa100:thanks

أسوما
11-02-2010, 05:52 PM
your words are very nice
http://www.mayyar.com/album/data/media/23/thanks.jpg

ACME
02-03-2010, 06:24 PM
Thanks To All For Their Encouraging Comments

ريحانة الفردوس.
02-03-2010, 07:50 PM
Your words are very nice

Keep it up

M.o_o.N
02-03-2010, 08:13 PM
Wish you the best brother

I enjoyed reading your poem , wallah I can't imagin there in KSA such a great English poets like you Masha Allah ^^

Keep writing dear

ACME
03-03-2010, 01:37 AM
Wish you the best brother

I enjoyed reading your poem , wallah I can't imagin there in KSA such a great English poets like you Masha Allah ^^

Keep writing dear



Dear Renoa , even in your replies you are special

This is the best reply I ever read

May Allah reward you the best

For your back up

For You I say



Let me say thank you for the gift
And more thanks for the thought
The greatest thing I can thank you for
is all the joy you’ve brought.

Thanks Soooo Much

.

مريم علي
04-03-2010, 10:02 AM
That `s truly amazing . you should send it to the american singer [josh groban ]He `s amazing too & when you do that ,it `ll become HIT NO.1...........................aND WE ARE WAITING

RAIN SONG
05-03-2010, 02:47 PM
Thanx sirhasan
Really u hv emotional sense
U hv an ability to use words in their correct place
U r great poet

مهـرة الـروح
06-03-2010, 02:49 AM
wow

i don't have any word to say

except masha'allah

we r proud so proud ov you

keep it up and good luck

sakina27
08-03-2010, 02:28 PM
I'm new here I have read a number of your posts and I was surprised it's an amazing

wow

ACME
04-04-2010, 03:30 PM
wow

i don't have any word to say

except masha'allah

we r proud so proud ov you

keep it up and good luck



Dear Muhrah
Thanks a lot for your ecouragement
I appreciate your response very much

.

eastrenrose
04-04-2010, 08:37 PM
it s really touch the heart .
i hope to read more of your poems
thanks SIR

ACME
05-04-2010, 08:11 AM
it s really touch the heart .
i hope to read more of your poems
thanks SIR


I thank your nice passing dear

جوهر
09-04-2010, 02:04 PM
machaa allah

thanks a looooooooot

ACME
09-04-2010, 03:35 PM
machaa allah

thanks a looooooooot



My thanks to your nice passing , too

ACME
10-04-2010, 04:44 PM
I'm new here I have read a number of your posts and I was surprised it's an amazing

wow


Thanks for your nice words . I appreciate them

BloumagrieT
10-04-2010, 08:59 PM
And between the yes-no and may be-may be not,

we feel lost and confused

These are wonderful lines

Thanks

sir

ACME
10-04-2010, 09:22 PM
And between the yes-no and may be-may be not,

we feel lost and confused

These are wonderful lines

Thanks

sir




Your passing is greatly appreciated , thanks

dolphy
11-04-2010, 11:12 PM
well
u r great and we all beleive in u
very touchy poem
hope u the best

ACME
12-04-2010, 12:00 AM
well
u r great and we all beleive in u
very touchy poem
hope u the best


Your passing is appreciated . Thanks for your lovely words