My first try

[**PRINCESS**]

hey everyone

i would really like to share my first try in writing poems with u

and i really hope u will help me and be supportive

and please please tell me your opinion




It may be my mistake,
but you never give or take.
I did something wrong,
and I hope to belong.

When I needed your love
you weren't there to give.
When I needed you
nothing was true.


I asked for your protection,
you gave me no attention.
All I gain were pains;
all I found were blames.

After all you did to me ,
I will finally feel free.
I have to forgive,
but I won't anymore give .



so0o what do you think ??

[فسحة امل]

waaaaaaaaw it is amazing
believe me honey
It is an interesting poem
I really enjoyed when I read it:smile (40):

[DR AHLAIN]

What an amazing poem



**PRINCESS**


well done I really liked it

keep on you are a poet project

:)

[ACME]

Full of deep emotions and feelings
Keep it up my dear
I really liked it
:smile (40):

[NoOneDeserveMe]

Si formidable

بالفرنسية تعني


جداااااااا رااااااااااااائعه

[NoOneDeserveMe]

can i keep it >>>>>>:smile (40):

[:lost lady:]

Nice one
Keep it up
waiting for more

[**PRINCESS**]

thank u everyone for the great support


I really appreciate this encourage


and of course u can keep it


it's all your's


thank u all

I'm really glade u like it

[rose rani]

I like it so much
keep up the good work

[الكفراوي]

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[الكفراوي]

:girl face (192):

[جاكوار2]

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[البـارع]

what a nice poem :smile (40):

i like it tooo much
nice feelings

go ahead

[**PRINCESS**]

thank you my friends

thank you so0o much

i really appreciate this

[eastrenrose]

nice try
try to read more poetry thats will help your in writing

[Nanosh]

Go ahead
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[S..S]

So nice words

Thaaaank

U

[LeenoSh]

hello

writing mor my dear
this your topic very very nice
I Like this ....


thank you agine ..

[**PRINCESS**]

thank you all

it's my pleasure

[ملاك السعادة]

marvellous........i like it...keep it up my sister:girl face (186):

[فـيصـل]

wooow

we have a brilliant writer...my sis

just keep it up

and in the near future...you will be a famous person

May Allah reward you

[أسوما]

so0o what do you think ??


??????????? what
are you Joking
it's beautiful

thanks alot

[ܟjust E]

^_^


nice try



I Like it


Allah protect u


Go ahead

[light the moon]

really nice poem
Keep it up

thanks alot
we are witing more

[**PRINCESS**]

I would really like to thank you all

for being supportive

and drawing a smile on my face

thank you so mush

[الفارس]

amazing
thankssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss alot