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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : I*******A Love Story By Sirhasan******I



ACME
02-02-2010, 02:23 PM
A Sad Love Story

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She and I had been together for a long time , but something that none of us knew made us apart . I did not see her for a whole week and I really began to go mad . She disappeared Suddenly . I asked about
her everywhere but got no clue .I phoned her mobile hundreds of times but she did not reply .
This went on for a month . A complete month of agony and despair .
During this month my whole life deteriorated . Things changed from bad to worse . My life became very gloomy. The days were depressing and the nights were fearful nightmares . I really was afraid of losing her .
I was not ready to forgo the only thing that made life bearable and worth living . Thus ,
I kept aloof from my friends and relatives .I turned into a lonesome man who kept himself to himself
I did not mixed with my friends . I rarely go out of my home . I just spent hours and hours with
her pictures talking to them . The more I remember our intimate times together , the more I cry .I cry and cry and cry .Finally , I collapsed and then knew nothing . The next morning I wake up very tired and another depressing day begins .
My friends began to feel anxious for me . They tried their best to take me out of this . Whenever they went to a café , a restaurant or a park , they take me with them .They tried to amuse me and made me laugh but I was dying from inside . They did all this to help me get over my love problem .
After three months , I gathered up my courage and tried to lead the normal life that everybody enjoyed
I pretended that I did not care anymore but I did . I pretended that I forgot her but I did not .Something in my heart still reminded me of her . I pretended and pretended but nothing was true .
Then one day , the truth came out .It was Thursday , and I Will never forget it as long as I lived .As I
entered the nearest shopping mall , I bumped into someone who was carrying a plastic bags full of items . May I was day dreaming of her , who knows .I felt embarrassed and began to clear the mess
I made . I began to collect the items from the floor . As I raised my eyes to say sorry , I saw her for the first time .I stood still . I did not believe my eyes . Was it real ? Was it a dream that came true ?
Here she is , as beautiful as she always was .Her lovely face and glimmering eyes that once captivated me .I was greeted with a huge smile . My feelings were a mixture of fear , astonishment , disbelief and happiness . The moment I saw tears falling from her eyes , my legs gave way and I fell to the ground .
I stretched both my arms and cried like a baby and said " Hello , My Love "
The End

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I hope You like it – My regards to all .
Note :
This story raises many questions which I preferred not to answer
I Kept the story open – ended to your imagination to fly high and complete it

S..S
02-02-2010, 02:49 PM
:smile (6):

DIMPLES
02-02-2010, 03:43 PM
WOOOW
VERY WONDERFULL STORY
thanks

rose rani
02-02-2010, 11:38 PM
you have a nice way
in writing story
you keep the reader continue
untill he or she finishes the stroy

thank you for sharing us
we are waiting for your new topics

ACME
03-02-2010, 12:03 AM
wooow
very wonderfull story
thanks


dimples

many thanks to you for passing and commenting nicely

ACME
03-02-2010, 12:07 AM
you have a nice way
in writing story
you keep the reader continue
untill he or she finishes the stroy

thank you for sharing us
we are waiting for your new topics


I thank you deeply for your nice words

May Allah bless you

:lost lady:
03-02-2010, 02:12 PM
Thats a sad LOVE story
You break our hearts by telling us this one >>no TEARS loolz
Sirhasan
Masha ' Allah
Very talented person
keep it up please
May Allah keep You a way from sadness

ACME
05-02-2010, 12:32 AM
lost lady

Thanks for nice words

May Allah bless You

sea breeze
06-02-2010, 08:00 AM
sirhasan

What a lovely story you wrote which is full of feelings
I was imagining it as it happened in front of me
I prefer not to complete it because it has a suitable end
Well done brother and keep going

Nanosh
07-02-2010, 08:46 PM
it touches my heart and I hope you have bright future in writing stories
Thank u
Dear
sirhasan

أسوما
11-02-2010, 04:30 PM
thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks alot
you are very Gifted

ACME
13-02-2010, 02:13 AM
Sea breeze

Nanosh

Asoma



Many thanks for your passing

And commenting so nicely

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ACME
17-02-2010, 07:54 PM
I hope other members like it

Petunia
17-02-2010, 09:49 PM
it's a great story bother thanks soo much

ok I wish if i can end it with a happy end but because of your topic is " A sad love story"

so I'll end it with a very sad end if you don't mind


don't be depressed all loooooooool


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After a while we sat together and I asked her a rain of questions...where were you, what happened, why did you answer my messages and calls…but she stopped me and said with dropping tears and said: stop it everything has finished between us we won't be together any more" what..? I replied….she stayed silent looking down>>>I continued...ba ba but why? What happened...why are you saying that? I asked…because I got married…she replied…yes he is a rich man who my father likes and there is no chance that we would be together again…she said…before finishing her speech I lost my consciousness ..Finally after that moment I didn't see her ever trying to forget everything but how, can anyone help me please?

ACME
18-02-2010, 12:20 AM
Dear Pink Pen

What a great writer you are . Masha Allah You have prolific imagination

I liked your way of writing so much . Please keep on writing and read a lot

You are and will be a distiguished writer indeed , so carry on

:smile (40):

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ريحانة الفردوس.
18-02-2010, 01:50 AM
very nice story
I like it
thanks alot

ACME
06-03-2010, 12:13 AM
I hope others find it touching too

RAIN SONG
06-03-2010, 09:02 PM
I like ur writings
U r gifted

ACME
06-03-2010, 09:18 PM
I like ur writings
U r gifted


Thanks So Much For Your Compliment Dear

M.o_o.N
06-03-2010, 09:22 PM
You are endowed writer , poet and what else?

Masha Allah keep up the good work .

Have a blessed day.

ACME
06-03-2010, 09:40 PM
You are endowed writer , poem and what else?

Masha Allah keep up the good work .

Have a blessed day.



Dear Renoa , Many Thanks To U 4 UR Generous Remark

May Allah Bless U

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احســـــاس
07-03-2010, 12:20 PM
Then you discovered that it wasn't she !0
After a while; you waked up with yourself falling down ur bed !!0

Will this suit to be a good end ?:smile (71):?0

Alot of thanks,, great work and pls, accept my passing ...0

ACME
28-03-2010, 02:48 PM
Then you discovered that it wasn't she !0
After a while; you waked up with yourself falling down ur bed !!0

Will this suit to be a good end ?:smile (71):?0

Alot of thanks,, great work and pls, accept my passing ...0


Thanks a lot Ihsas for your creativity and gentle passing

جوهر
28-03-2010, 04:09 PM
thanks a looooooooot it's really a touching story
you have a wonderful way of writing stories & poems

ACME
02-04-2010, 12:17 AM
thanks a looooooooot it's really a touching story
you have a wonderful way of writing stories & poems




Thanks a lot for your passing and comment

ACME
11-04-2010, 10:56 AM
I hope others will like it , too

dolphy
11-04-2010, 09:00 PM
nice story makes anyone read it want to complete it
but
it didnt make me cry
it makes me laugh :smile (72):
and
after the ending
by pink pen
yaa its sad story :smile (30):
great :smile (40):

BloumagrieT
11-04-2010, 09:15 PM
I loved the ending and leaving it open is a good idea

Thanks brother

sirhasan

ACME
12-04-2010, 12:03 AM
nice story makes anyone read it want to complete it
but
it didnt make me cry
it makes me laugh :smile (72):
and
after the ending
by pink pen
yaa its sad story :smile (30):
great :smile (40):


Thanks a lot for your passing and remark

ACME
12-04-2010, 12:06 AM
I loved the ending and leaving it open is a good idea

Thanks brother

sirhasan





Your addition is utterly true . I appreciated your passing
Thanks indeed

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