My Lonely Tear

[JuSt Me]

It's going so cold tonight
A lonely tear went outside
It was so cold, it couldn't find
a hand to hold or a gentle whisper
to say it's gonna be alright

It regrets to go out along, over the
cold cheek in the cold night
Leaving the eye of proud holding it
for years. finally it realized that
it's ok to cry but it's not ok to wait
for someone to understand

Hidden inside the eye, it was lonely but
it was safe. Now it will always be a memory
of weakness that's what it will be, a lonely
tear went outside in a cold night

[الغاليه]

brilliant

a profound thought

thanx for sharing it with us dear brother...or sister

am not sure :confused:

[JuSt Me]

Dear AlGhaliah!
I am too grateful for your reply, by the way, I am a man, a man of constant sorrow:


I am a man of constant sorrow
I've seen trouble all my day.

For the whole long years I've been in trouble
No pleasures here on earth I found
For in this world I'm bound to ramble
I have lots of friends close but can`t help me now.

Could anybody buries me in some deep valley
For many years where I may lay
Then she may noticing why she goes away
While I am sleeping in my grave.

Maybe you think I'm just a stranger
My face you'll never see no more.
But there is one hope that is given
I hope meet her on God's golden shore.

[Instigator]

,Dear brother JuSt Me
.you really have sensitive and emotional feelings
.Your words sounds lots of hope and happiness

.Keep it up
.I hope to see more from you

[اسيــ حبه ــرة]

Just Me

You're absoloutely brilliant

and so clever to write these feelings

Accept my deep appriciations

I'm a big fan for your poems

(After Instigator's .. Of course)

Keep on please

[password26]

[align=left]Nice poem thanks for sharing it with us. Anyway cheer up this is life full of ups and downs & it will never be fair. Well I advise you to read this great book that changed the way I look at things try to get it (who moved my cheese) by Spencer Johnson, M.D[/center]

[JuSt Me]

It is my pleasure to like my poem.

Bro or Sis password26, thanks for your advice, but nothing is going to settle my affair just one thing and I am begging it to do it.

[عبدالرحمن حرب]

Thank youhttp:// : so much for all these sensitive poems

[SuPeRLaRk]

thanks my dear, Just me
for this sensitive feeling
really it very nice poem