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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : The last word



eastrenrose
09-02-2010, 12:01 AM
The last word I have heard
Still ringing in my ears
Wake all the sleeping memories
Revival the past, open the old wounds
That word you say to breaks the spell
The spell you put on me, for years
Locked my heart, locked my heart
Any one who will knock
No, one come in, no one

Here you are, you come to my life
Like a spring breeze,
Carries all the happiness,
But you did not gave me one
Here you are a ghost I see
No feelings, no words to say
Just cold. Just cold

The spring will go, all that he left
A flower without colour, without smell
Dancing with wind
Waiting for the one
Who will pick her this time

written by eastrenrose

iam waiting for your opoinons

:lost lady:
09-02-2010, 12:13 AM
Sweetheart
what a nice poem
well done
I really liked it
keep on please

The tolerant
09-02-2010, 03:03 PM
Here you are, you come to my life
Like a spring breeze,
Carries all the happiness

nice words
i like it
may Allah keeps you

S..S
09-02-2010, 03:26 PM
My dear sis

eastrenrose

what a wonderful words


)A flower without colour,(

So painful


I like it so much

Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank U

rose rani
09-02-2010, 06:21 PM
so nice poem
I have enjoyed reading it
keep up the good work

Petunia
10-02-2010, 01:15 AM
really liked it

thanks for sharing us

happy to be hare

eastrenrose
10-02-2010, 04:02 PM
Thanks for all who read my poem and encourge me.iam really happy you like it .

M.o_o.N
10-02-2010, 04:05 PM
Masha Allah you have the poets magic . Keep writing dear sister

G L O R Y
10-02-2010, 04:12 PM
May Allah Keeps in peace
Our Teach. eastrenrose
Soo .. Wonderful
But I Knew That You Will Write
Something More Brighter .. reflect Who Happy
You Are >> By Allah's Will
Glade To Be Here
God Be With All Times

ريما الحسين
10-02-2010, 11:27 PM
how a cute words

thx alot sweety

Regards

sad silence
11-02-2010, 01:21 PM
so beautiful lines

Keep On

أسوما
11-02-2010, 05:42 PM
thaaaaaaaaaanks very much
you will be agood Poet