مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : ~*~Answered Prayers~*~
الغاليه
12-12-2005, 12:18 AM
this is a poem I wrote....hope u like it
At midnight, I watch the shade …
Waiting for the dark to fade..
And suddenly, you are here..
My prayers were answered..
Flame, is that the word??
Or is it something like the fog!!
But I know that you are here..
My prayers were answered..
All this madness in my heart..
Flickering light in my eyes..
Tell the world am in love..
Surely with the right one..
life without you seems a loss..
Having no one I can trust
Then like rain, you came down..
Promising paradise in your arm..
Kept me sheltered from the snow..
Warmed my heart with passions' glow ..
Like a candle, lit up my days..
Surrounding me with tender grace..
I touch the stars when I'm with you..
For you are a dream came true..
Gently walking on the beach..
Lovely shells at our reach..
I drew a map of happiness…
Said goodbye to loneliness..
You taught me how to float so high..
Leaving all my sadness behind..
don't you leave, not now or ever..
Your absence tastes so bitter..
Unbearable, like a bleeding wound..
That is how I long for you…
Cruel is life, full of tears..
I'm so lost when you're not here..
Instigator
12-12-2005, 12:39 AM
.It is a very lovely and wonderful poem
,Dear Alghalyah
.thanks a lot for sharing it with us
.Keep it up
password26
12-12-2005, 12:53 AM
Thanks a lot its a really nice poem ..... it touched my heart ...... amazing how some people can express their feelings in such a beautiful way.... I hope I marry a man who can write poetry lol :p
الغاليه
12-12-2005, 01:19 AM
Instigator
am always happy to see you
thanx soooo much dear brother
password26
I wish your dream comes true ,sooon :D
thanx for passing & for your kind comment
password26
12-12-2005, 01:35 AM
don't mention it darling ...... truly you deserve more ....... :p
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< still dreaming of marrying a poet :D
الغاليه
12-12-2005, 01:52 AM
keeeeeep dreaming :D...
I wish u all the best darling
SuPeRLaRk
12-12-2005, 02:44 AM
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[Tell the world am in love..http://www.al-molatham.net/p2/c/7.gif
Surely with the right one..http://www.al-molatham.net/p2/c/13.gif
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life without you seems a loss..
Having no one I can trusthttp://www.al-molatham.net/p2/c/15.gif
really you are very creative one and your brain is "expensive"like your nick
name
http://www.al-molatham.net/p2/f/6.gif
my ALLAh bless you
We wait more from you
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JuSt Me
12-12-2005, 03:29 AM
Dear Alghaliah, I can not express or comment, higher than this. Thanks
Cruel is life, full of tears..
I'm so lost when you're not here
الغاليه
12-12-2005, 11:51 PM
really you are very creative one and your brain is "expensive"like your nickname
woooooow
big words for me bro :D
thanx for your kind compliment
الغاليه
13-12-2005, 12:06 AM
Dear Alghaliah, I can not express or comment, higher than this. Thanks
it seems like that I can't thank you enough :o
am so honoured by your words
God bless you brother>>>again...am sure :D
اسيــ حبه ــرة
13-12-2005, 04:31 PM
Hi my dear sister Alghalyah
What an amazing things you bring
This one is sooooo lovely
Really ... we have talented people here
I wish you all the best
Go ahead and show us your abilities
الغاليه
14-12-2005, 01:37 AM
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii dear sis
talented??????????...I think it's big word 4 me :D
am glad u liked it
thanx...and wish u all the best
DR AHLAIN
14-12-2005, 01:19 PM
Like a candle, lit up my days..
Surrounding me with tender grace..
I touch the stars when I'm with you..
For you are a dream came true..
wonderful http://www.cheesebuerger.de/images/smilie/liebe/d026.gifpoem
BRAVO>>> (FRENCH)Im NOT QUITE SURE OF IT'S SPELLING
Alghaliah
We are so proud that we have a star such as You
Thank you very much for responding to us when we asked to write more poets
You deserve cheer
http://www.cheesebuerger.de/images/smilie/froehlich/e016.gif
AND
congratulation FOR YOUR NOW PAINT
(GREEN) :D
الغاليه
15-12-2005, 01:07 AM
thanx soooooooooo much dear brother
I hope I don't disappoint u
nader1
20-12-2005, 11:53 PM
dear valuable girl
congratulations for the wonderful poem u have written. it's a very elegant peice of work and i liked much.
am not a poet to comment or critisize on ur poem but i will tell u what i think, no hard feelings
1- a very touching poem with great and warm passion.
2- not really sure about wheather it is rymed or not.
3- check the tone and try to put it in a clear stanza
this would make it gain more credit, though italready has.
if i were meant by such a poem, i might lose consciousness.
well done wealthy poet and keep up the good work.
sorry about what i have written.thanks for ur valuable participation
الغاليه
21-12-2005, 12:02 AM
dear brother nader1
it's nice of u to read my humble words
am not a poet and will never be
I only write what I feel
very glad that u liked it
I'll put more effort into my next poem
thanx sooooo much
الهمة العالية
26-12-2005, 09:57 PM
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you are woooooooooooooooooooonderful
the way you write
soooooo great
Go ahead my darling
am waiting for you[/COLOR]:rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes:
الغاليه
26-12-2005, 11:16 PM
I can't believe my eyse:eek:
finally....I see my dearest friend here...reading my humble poem:o
u r the greatest my dear
thank u soooooooo much 4 ur sweet lovley words
May Allah bless u
English Lover
29-12-2005, 08:44 PM
Oh.....what day is this ....
we discover a poetess here ....
not only poetess
she's a great one
thanx to
your feelings
which is wonderful
I have a good voice
Can I sing this poem if I get a chance in the media?......hhhhh
llloooooooooooooooooooollll
الغاليه
30-12-2005, 01:47 AM
Oh.....what day is this ....
we discover a poetess here ....
llloooooooooooooooooooollll
woooooooooooow
poetess??? not a chance:D
thank u dear bro English Lover 4 ur lovely, sweet words
they mean sooooo much 2 me
I have a good voice
Can I sing this poem if I get a chance in the media?......hhhhh
llloooooooooooooooooooollll
of course u can>>>knowing that such a chance would never come:D
just kidding
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