Lonely Outside!

[JuSt Me]

Far away, out of sight
On that lonely rock outside
There stand a broken heart

Rejected outsider
Rolling like thunder
Shivering with bitter

Everybody cares for him
But,
For that, he did no longer

One day they will discover
They lost that genuine treasure
A prefect main of gentle pleasure

He tried hardly to be stronger
Deceiving beats will allow no longer
Stepping forward rising flags of surrender
Deserters they are, all want him die
So smoothly, he did with a tear in his eye

[sokara]

thanx sis

its very nice posting

.Keep it up

[Instigator]

,Dear brother Just Me
your way of expressing your feelings
.is so lovely and touching to read

.Thanks a lot for sharing it with us
.Keep it up

[JuSt Me]

Many thanks for you, I like that you like it.

[SuPeRLaRk]

thanks

very nice poem

keep on

[الغاليه]

die.....death.....goodbye


why all this sadness??? :(

in spite of that...it's really amazing


keep it up brother>>>> this time am sure :D

[JuSt Me]

My bro SuPeRLaRk and my sis Alghaliah, what a pleasure to me to see your replies...

[JuSt Me]

keep it up brother>>>> this time am sure

Very nice :D

[اسيــ حبه ــرة]

So wounderful as usual

Your words are like an ocean of

painful meanings ... but they are not

joyless .. they show us how love is painful

I wish you an everlastin happiness in your life

[yesmeena]

Wonderful feel that make me stop

just outside my heart u can see white and black colours of life

thanx for our posting

[JuSt Me]

I just can say nothing as value as your replies my sis Aseerat Alhob and yesmeena, of course all of you